Confused Love

The trustworthiness of your mind that creates an illusion of my vision

The faithfulness of your hopes and dreams clashes into my impaired hearing

The solution of your outstandings of your commitment towards your soul

The settlement of your insight of life that gathers from one side to the light

The concentration of your heart that goes into my mind to fulfill hopes of us

The faith in we both have is a greater value of our life rather than money

The expansion of our gratitude to one another that keeps us together

Hmm... this is a good piece... but...it's like... with no "legs" :p i think it has no ending...
thats my opinion though...i think it's hanging... @.@

I love it!!!!!
Your words are beautifully written!!!!
Keep up the great work!!!!