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  1. Mar 14, 2007 11:31 AM #1
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    confused love~~**( part 2 )

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    confused love~~**( part 2 )

    Confused in the love I now have.

    Two guys I think love me which I do love them both.

    I’m told to play.

    Play them both.

    But that wouldn’t seem right to me.

    What should I do?

    I thought I should find out which one does love me.

    One I haven’t heard from in a month the other always there for me.

    I’m so confused in my heart.

    Who should I like more?

    Which loves me?

    This love is just confused.

    I asked the one that I know I now love.

    Dose he love me?

    You might know the answer.

    You might not.

    What you think it is?

    Yes

    No

    If u had chosen yes then your right no then your not.

    This love is no longer confusing.

    I understand it all.

    And I know I’m happy with my choice.

    And I’m glad I went for the right guy.

    One who loves me and always there.

    Never put me down or ask inappropriate questions.

    This love is no longer confusing.

    This is my love.
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  2. Mar 14, 2007 01:22 PM #2
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    Re: confused love~~**( part 2 )

    awww.....that's so kawaii equinn....good job. ^__^ I like it.

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    Re: confused love~~**( part 2 )

    It was kinda sweet for me but other than that i like it equinn
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    Re: confused love~~**( part 2 )

    Lol a good ending Hope all of u guys will get and ending like that lol...
    pity the other guy though...

    Nice poem equinn ^^
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    Re: confused love~~**( part 2 )

    It is alright..but i don't like the structure because the poem doesn't really flow(i am sorry).However by writing something that can happen in life is what i like because it allows the reader to reflect upon something like this that can happen to them and deal with it their own way.
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    Re: confused love~~**( part 2 )

    hehe thank you soooooOOOOooo much for the comments ^__^
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    Re: confused love~~**( part 2 )

    Nice job Lilly you did a great job. ^^ you're getting better and better by day. Can't wait till your new poem.


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    Re: confused love~~**( part 2 )

    awww thats so sweet
    I the one who's always there for you? yup def. the right choice =)
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