Confused (Poem)

White_Mage88 · Aug 21, 2006, 04:49 PM

This is one of the poems hidden away on my computer. I decided to post one and my friend Sincere picked this one for me to post. Tell me what you think.

So Confused
Everywhere there seems a twist or turn
First You have me baffled
Next I’m the one confusing myself

I’ve become lost along the way
On this unfamiliar road
I’ve always tried to stay away from this place
But I can’t bring myself to turn back now

I’ve tried fitting the pieces together
But most are missing
Or don’t fit anywhere in this puzzle
It’s still a mystery to me

I’ve tried getting help
But no one seems to understand
I just want an answer
To a question that I’d never ask

HieisLove · Aug 21, 2006, 04:59 PM

Short but yet good poem. Keep it up!!!

fma1012 · Aug 21, 2006, 05:00 PM

That was awesome. ^-^ I liked how it ended.

animechick · Aug 21, 2006, 05:32 PM

yea it was pretty good, i prefer ones that ryme, but thats personal, didnt have a lot of emotion behind it, so i take it you dint write from experience, more then from an idea. not bad tho babe.

For3v3r_Lost · Aug 21, 2006, 08:49 PM

I like the poem. As long as it explains the emotion from the words, the better. Keep it up. I love it.

ItsJensLife · Aug 21, 2006, 08:58 PM

that was like so kool i loved it

Aug 21, 2006, 04:49 PM	#1 (permalink)
White_Mage88 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 323 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 2,416	Confused (Poem) This is one of the poems hidden away on my computer. I decided to post one and my friend Sincere picked this one for me to post. Tell me what you think. So Confused Everywhere there seems a twist or turn First You have me baffled Next I’m the one confusing myself I’ve become lost along the way On this unfamiliar road I’ve always tried to stay away from this place But I can’t bring myself to turn back now I’ve tried fitting the pieces together But most are missing Or don’t fit anywhere in this puzzle It’s still a mystery to me I’ve tried getting help But no one seems to understand I just want an answer To a question that I’d never ask
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HieisLove TOP DIVA KITTEN -purrs- Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In a Runway Show Posts: 883 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,952	Re: Confused (Poem) Short but yet good poem. Keep it up!!! __________________ ~Music Is My Boyfriend!!~
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fma1012 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere Posts: 470 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,703	Re: Confused (Poem) That was awesome. ^-^ I liked how it ended. __________________ ThAnKs CaNdId FoR ThE SwEet SiG~
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animechick is backkk Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: texas Posts: 799 Thanks: 3 Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts Credits: 2,232	Re: Confused (Poem) yea it was pretty good, i prefer ones that ryme, but thats personal, didnt have a lot of emotion behind it, so i take it you dint write from experience, more then from an idea. not bad tho babe. __________________ sig by SasuraiHell [[*she wanted to be a dancer, now all she wants is to be with you*]] www.myspace.com/mourningtonight
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For3v3r_Lost Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: My own little world Posts: 249 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 310	Re: Confused (Poem) I like the poem. As long as it explains the emotion from the words, the better. Keep it up. I love it. __________________ .:\|Myspace Profile\|.:.\|My Forum\|.:.\|My AO Gallery\|.:.\|My December\|:. "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."
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