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    Confused (Poem)

    This is one of the poems hidden away on my computer. I decided to post one and my friend Sincere picked this one for me to post. Tell me what you think.

    So Confused
    Everywhere there seems a twist or turn
    First You have me baffled
    Next I’m the one confusing myself

    I’ve become lost along the way
    On this unfamiliar road
    I’ve always tried to stay away from this place
    But I can’t bring myself to turn back now

    I’ve tried fitting the pieces together
    But most are missing
    Or don’t fit anywhere in this puzzle
    It’s still a mystery to me

    I’ve tried getting help
    But no one seems to understand
    I just want an answer
    To a question that I’d never ask

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    Re: Confused (Poem)

    Short but yet good poem. Keep it up!!!
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    Re: Confused (Poem)

    That was awesome. ^-^ I liked how it ended.


    Thanks lifeforce! (:

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    Re: Confused (Poem)

    yea it was pretty good, i prefer ones that ryme, but thats personal, didnt have a lot of emotion behind it, so i take it you dint write from experience, more then from an idea. not bad tho babe.
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    Re: Confused (Poem)

    I like the poem. As long as it explains the emotion from the words, the better. Keep it up. I love it.
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    Re: Confused (Poem)

    that was like so kool i loved it

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