confusing love with lust

THIS IS NOT A POEM. JUST A SAMPLE OF THINGS I WRITE. IM HELLA BORED SO YEA. IT'S A PART OF A SHORT NOVEL I WROTE. I MADE IT AS PG 13 AS POSSIBLE

he an i shared pasionate,firery kisses as we entered the hotel room. luckily the door was ajar so no keys where needed. the hotel room was lovely. rose petals all over the bed, candles laid out setting the romantic mood for he and i while sweet music played by the bed made it beautiful. i couldnt wait for him to take all of me and make me his. he pushed me against the smooth marble hotel wall and began to undo my lace halter as i began undoing his shirt also. his hands explored my body as i moaned in pleasure. his touches where making my body do unspeakable things that caused me to think erotic thoughts about he and i. i wanted to return the favor by removing the rest of his shirt and kissing him gently on his hard, flat chest. our passion for each other began to rise even more as i began playing with him.

he picked me up and set me down on the king size bed while we kissed passionately. the sheets where so soft and made me want him even more .



thats all i can write. the rest i cant make pg 13. NOT A FREAKING POEM PG 13!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thats actually really good princess

wow, that is definitely not a poem...i think i need to refer my boyfriend to this thread.....

thanks. thats the best of pg i could get

That was actually pretty good, there is nothing kool like writting when you are bored.

yea, although personally i would think it would be rated as pg-13. but hey, it's still pretty close

your right. pg 13 fits this thingy much better.

yea when u start removing clothes it gets to be pg-13