Life is so confusing how
it happened i don't know
but from the first moment
i knew what had to be ,from the
first hello to the last hug it will
always confuse me how i feel for you.
I know that i should feel this way
but my feeling's there so strong
if only i could have been there
first there would be no confusing
me, i will never leave nor even
sigh because at least i have my
The sun now breaking over the hill
as i sit hear writing this, i think of
how things have become so complicated
only wishing they were simple but they
never will be.
this poem is about how things in life are more complicated
than some realise and hope i worded this so people
will get this. any comments or suggestions are appreciated
This was a very nice poem, I liked it. I thought you did well in making people understand how you feel. Nice job.
At first it sounded like a love poem but at the end I see what the topic was about. Very nice.