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    Confusion

    Life is so confusing how
    it happened i don't know
    but from the first moment
    i knew what had to be ,from the
    first hello to the last hug it will
    always confuse me how i feel for you.

    I know that i should feel this way
    but my feeling's there so strong
    if only i could have been there
    first there would be no confusing
    me, i will never leave nor even
    sigh because at least i have my
    best friend.

    The sun now breaking over the hill
    as i sit hear writing this, i think of
    how things have become so complicated
    only wishing they were simple but they
    never will be.

    this poem is about how things in life are more complicated
    than some realise and hope i worded this so people
    will get this. any comments or suggestions are appreciated
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Confusion

    This was a very nice poem, I liked it. I thought you did well in making people understand how you feel. Nice job.
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    Re: Confusion

    At first it sounded like a love poem but at the end I see what the topic was about. Very nice.
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