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    Confusion

    Confusion
    Ruler of many.
    Son of none.
    Strikes when it wants.
    Ordered by some.
    Confusion.

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    Re: Confusion

    Hey! I like your poems... so short, but still interesting... a few words that pack quite a punch.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Confusion

    i agree with peach.short.but very good descriptions.cant wait to see more kk?keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Confusion

    WOW I have never seen sucha short poem and it come out soo well.

    I love it. Keep it up.

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    Re: Confusion

    *smiles* short, sweet, and to the point^^ it's good and i like it. Keep up the great work.

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    Re: Confusion

    Thank you all. I have an idea of one poem I shall do.

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    Re: Confusion

    It's a good one *smile*.... Quiet short but thoughtful.... Hope to see more! -PEACE!-
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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    Re: Confusion

    nice poem, short but straight to the point.
    maybe you should write haiku?

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