Really nice. I like it. The only thing: "They connect to another". I think it should be "to one another". You're really good at writing small poems.
Clouds through rain touch dirt.
Wind lets leaves and sky flirt.
They connect to another.
Why can't we reach eachother.
Really nice. I like it. The only thing: "They connect to another". I think it should be "to one another". You're really good at writing small poems.
WOW XD i love it !!! T,T that is the way i feel in a way ^,^ .. and i agree with you Japxican he is really good at short poems Nu~ .. =^_^=
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