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    Clouds through rain touch dirt.
    Wind lets leaves and sky flirt.
    They connect to another.
    Why can't we reach eachother.

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    Re: Connect

    Really nice. I like it. The only thing: "They connect to another". I think it should be "to one another". You're really good at writing small poems.

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    Re: Connect

    WOW XD i love it !!! T,T that is the way i feel in a way ^,^ .. and i agree with you Japxican he is really good at short poems Nu~ .. =^_^=
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