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    Connect the Dots.

    Something quaint and short... Not really headed in any one particular direction.. just random.. ramblings...


    Connect the Dots.

    A question of great phrase;
    the meaning of being.
    Such trifles left unanswered,
    such eyes left unseeing.

    What road shall you pave?
    What bridge will you abolish?
    Have you thought of such things?
    Or are you one to only acknowledge.

    Thinking; such a tedious tool,
    best misused to calculate the frivolous.
    Questions rise and answers pass on,
    but to empathize veracity is quite marvelous

    So answer yourself with unanswered queries.
    And you might find what you’ve lost,
    for before you can understand the truth,
    You shall have to pay intelligent costs.
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    Re: Connect the Dots.

    very cool poem and i like how you really had to think
    i answeard a few og my on with this poem thanks. and i also
    have abolished more than one bridge to make new roads
    wich has lead me to this moment wich i happy with. and thanks for
    the really i enjoyed
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Connect the Dots.

    Ah thank 'ya... (forgive my texan accent :P )
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    Re: Connect the Dots.

    This is a great poem! It goes just how you said it would, in no particular direction but it makes you think! Even if it was random rambling it was very well written!

    Nice Job!
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    Re: Connect the Dots.

    I suppose.. I like making those that have the reader think here and there.. they're not to hard to conjure up :P.. and thanks for the compliment.
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