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    Consuming Loneliness

    Coldness chills my bones,
    My body heat starts to fail me.
    Unable to move any further,
    Reaching the limit.
    I collapse to the frozen floor,
    Shivering to keep alive.
    Watching my breath leave me,
    Wish, waiting to be rescued.
    Set free from this icy prison,
    Taking away this consuming loneliness.
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    Re: Consuming Loneliness

    Wow Sazzy thats actually pretty good even i can't come up with stuff like that anymore..oh and congrats on your 100TH POEM
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    Re: Consuming Loneliness

    Yay! 100th POEM!!!!! WHOO!!!!! Go SAZZY!!!!!!!

    I love this and also the type of words you used. Description of setting was awesome too^^ Short but Excellente! Keep it up^^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Yeah, Bye.

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