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    Controversial Letter

    To Whom it may concern:

    In these days & times
    You have ppl hustlin' in the streets
    Trying to get the next dollar
    Trying to make ends meet

    Wanting to get out of the hood
    Projects is what they was built on
    All they understood

    Getting out is all they know that is right
    To get a better opportunity
    Of that good life

    The streets are made up of
    Ppl that will do anything to get that money tight
    Females that will do anything
    If she likes the price

    Haters that will do anything
    To take you out of the spotlight
    Weak ppl that rather gun play
    Instead of fight

    So you better believe
    That the strong ones steel up
    With all their might

    Now we made these streets into our own battlefield
    Becoming "Demolition Men"
    Murder murder kill kill

    Only thing is this isn't a movie
    Not That 70's Show
    Cause isn't $*it groovy
    More like that sitcom Just Shoot Me

    This isn't living
    That's what the truth is
    Corruption in about 80 percent
    In most businesses

    All about them benjamins
    Money makes the world go around
    That's what the business is

    Politicians are more devious
    Than a con-artist
    That is mischievous

    Trying to miss achieve us
    Trying to miss lead us
    In the end all we have is us
    The ppl with a voice

    Trying to play us
    Like we have no choice
    But I keep my mouth
    Watery ole' so moist

    That's why I spit when I talk
    Can't keep me at a stand still
    So I move my feet when I walk

    Outline the big picture
    Like I carry around
    A piece of chalk

    Katrina is just one of the incidents
    Crack & AIDS was no accident
    That's just evident
    The government is the evidence

    Go ahead blame it on gays, gangsters & immigrants
    That's just relevant
    Twin Towers & Flight 93
    Was a hell of an event

    Got to take one down to protect ones defense
    Don't mean to offend
    Just switched over to offense

    Made a picture in motion to try & trick
    Ways to tribute
    In a way so slick

    You can say I'm being controversial or I'm sick
    I am probably just tired of your lies
    Yea'..! That's probably it

    Too many soldiers getting deployed
    And not enough coming home
    They don't deserve this
    It's hell over there & you sent them in the belly of the pit

    You keep the poorer poor
    And the richer rich
    I love America but you all is one of the reasons
    Why I say life is a b***h

    Sincerely Yours
    On animeonline I'm known as Inuruto
    But you all can call me Rick


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    Re: Controversial Letter

    yah i loved it keep up the goood work i hope u keep writing more and more good peoms lol good job

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    Quote Originally Posted by ME2LOL View Post
    yah i loved it keep up the goood work i hope u keep writing more and more good peoms lol good job
    Thanks for the comment... I didn't know if I really wanted to post this one on here... It is good to get positive feedback... Not saying that I wouldn't like to here the others if ppl don't like it... Thanks again!!!

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    Re: Controversial Letter

    that was tight ! hope to read me of your stuff
    keep the good work

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    Re: Controversial Letter

    Thats so cool how you wrote the poem!!!!! It was just so cool really! I loved how you wrote and it's just so catchy!!!!! I hope to see more of your great work!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Controversial Letter

    Quote Originally Posted by chrystalann2004 View Post
    that was tight ! hope to read me of your stuff
    keep the good work
    Quote Originally Posted by KuwiRules145 View Post
    Thats so cool how you wrote the poem!!!!! It was just so cool really! I loved how you wrote and it's just so catchy!!!!! I hope to see more of your great work!
    Thanks u gals or guys for the comment... I really do ppreciate the feedback... I try to write something worth while for ppl to read/view... Sometimes I think I be writing too long of a poem that repels ppl from even reading... Thanks for all the compliments!!! I will try to keep up my writing... But if anyone doesn't like my writing I will also like to here that also... To help me see your pov' of how I write... THANKS!!!

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