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    The Conversation

    Why am I here.

    Me... of all people.

    I went out of a car, flipping at 80mph.
    Landed 30 ft away.
    Found not breathing.
    And someone saved me.

    Last weekend you took a 7 year old.
    He drowned in a hotel swimming pool.

    So why'd you take him? Why do I live?
    Why me?!

    I hate being awake.
    Theres no cure for the pain I feel.
    The car accident... it was nothing.
    Nothing compared to the pain in my heart.

    I dont even like to sleep.
    Somehow even in my dreams I am unwanted.

    My kids ask me why I cry.

    I fear I make them miserable.
    I make everyone miserable.
    All thats left for me is fake smiles.
    Im not even sure why it is I deserved to be unloved.
    To live. Unloved.
    What the F*ck did I do?


    Why couldnt you just let me die?

    Are you even listening. People tell me you are.
    But all I hear is an echo.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: The Conversation

    i love this poem because its all
    about the echoes , people that
    say *he/she is listening or pat
    you on the back saying your just
    not open enough they dont know
    you at all.

    there all about makeing themselves feel good
    when they give you the typical responce because
    any one who really understands you will be there for YOU
    and let what you say to them slide from there back because
    they want you to be theres.

    anyone that says difrently is just wanting in
    your pants and thats no lie , anyway this poem
    is really awesome and i love how you let your
    emotions take over.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Conversation

    Oh my god... so sad... I don't know what to say...
    It's a nice poem... you can feel the confusion in it... And that's what freaks me out...
    I hope he answers you...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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