Thread: Convict

this is so sad, melancholic but nicely put together. i wonder if someone made youthink this way...

I think this poem is full of misery, but for some reason i seemed to enjoy it. The feelings of regreat and meloncoly filled my mind as i read through it. I like poems that actualy give off emotions

@PhoenixSara: Thanks for the comment. You guessed it right, someone made me feel this way (that was before ^^). I felt like a convict in his judgment... =0_o=

@mere: I am glad that you enjoyed reading my poem ^^. hihi, I am an emotional kind of writer. I do find inspiration on various emotions. ^^

This... is a very good poem.. been a long time since i last read any poem and im glad to have read this.. its worth it to read.. wait.. its more! ^^

First of all is the way of the words are used... the poem is quite short and yet descriptive... The flow was good and the mood on this poem.. made me read it slow thanks to the effect... ^^ good job on this one! Keep it up..

wow that poem was great, probably one of the best ive read in along time, careful ray it seems you have some comp on your hands anyways keep up the great work, hope to read more greatness from you in the future

@ Rayme: Yesh, it's been a long time since I made a poem buddy *I guess this doll needs to have some dusting done*. Nowadays, I really try to create poems that are short and yet gives some kind of imagery ^^. Thanks for the comment ^^

@tifa4cloud: I am really glad that you liked my poem ^^. Yesh, I'll try to do my best too. =^_^=