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    The Copies and Me

    Well where do i start to tell you the story,
    Of one man and his promised affection to me.
    Yes he did tell me he'd spend his forever,
    yet as he gave his love to me,
    someone came in to be his mistress
    someone who claimed to be his baby.

    While he lied to her never saying a word about me,
    that I knew all about her.
    I hung on to every word.
    Of a promise of one true love,
    of a promise of forever.
    Of the promise that i'd be his love,
    till his forever was through.

    How will I tell her I was the future,
    and she was a copy.
    When in his deepest pain,
    It was I who made him whole again.
    While the copies freaked out.
    I was called by his family,
    it was my words that calmed him,
    it was me who found him again.

    Stop saying you love him,
    that you truly knew his soul.
    None of us ever really knew him.
    for all you know none of us really had his heart.
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    Re: The Copies and Me

    it was really good except for the last line i didnt really get. and the flow was kinda choppy at the beginning at one point i didnt think you were going make your standing clear but it was really good^^
    keep up the good work =]
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    Re: The Copies and Me

    Well a promise can so easily be broken.... Unfortunately. But really good poem Phoenix

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