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    Corner

    In a corner, I bear the cost
    In a corner, I am so lost
    Into my arms I weep tenderly
    I wipe my tears so gingerly

    Through bleary eyes I then view
    I see a light coming through
    Burning bright, shining true
    Reach for the light is what I'll do

    As I dig myself out
    Dance outside, I then shout,
    "I am free, I am free
    Nowhere else I'd rather be."

    Like a bird freed from its cage
    I romp and stomp, run and play
    I revel in this freedom I found
    Never again shall my feet touch the ground

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    Re: Corner

    a very heart warming poem.....
    even though this is somewhat a short poem.....you put a lot of detail into and you made it rhyme to perfection....
    and the words go perfectly with the title.....about freedom and spreading your wings....
    great job ^^
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    It was actually longer than my last one, but I've always felt that a short poem usually has more impact than a longer one. I had written a long poem that I posted here called "Myself." I had gotten some compliments on it, but I don' write long ones all that much. Thnx for the compliment.
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    Re: Corner

    I'm quite impressed, Joe. You've got a talent for writing these poems that take me out of my sh*tty moods. I loved it! It's a good way to remind people that you're only in darkness as long as you let yourself sit there. Kudos!


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    That's a pretty high compliment, Thank u very much; atomik. I was inna mood ta write this type of poem, I'm tryin' ta get inta writin' and drawin' more. My poems r usually the first forays inta doin' jus' that.

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    Re: Corner

    Nice work, I look forward to more;D
    So keep on writing!!!

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    Thnx, I plan ta. I don' wanna push myself, I prefer ta feel my poems; rather than jus' try ta write them.

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