Couldn't,can't

bratling · Nov 05, 2007, 09:53 AM

I can't believe,
I can't forget.

The things they've done.
The things I regret.

I can't forgive,
Because I still see.

Every little thing,
That's ever been done to me.

It makes me bitter,
And more then suspicious.

I scream, I hit.
I bite, I throw dishes.

Tantrum after tantrum,
THat you've endured.

You really should,
Think about getting insured.

You call her crazy.
But she's got nothing on me.

Loss of control.
Loss of self.

I just wanna be someone else.
Even if it's just a while.

I wish that I could,
Find a real reason to smile.

Life and it's lies.
Make it feel like pointlessness.

Make me revel in my loneliness.
Because they'll never get it.

They'll never understand.
And probably neither will you.

Why I couldn't let you,
Be my man.

*atomik_sprout* · Nov 05, 2007, 09:57 AM

I understand, Chan. Believe me, I do. It's just a bit painful to know why things are the way they are. I'm sorry... for everything.

I like this poem, it's well written.

highteckdudu · Nov 05, 2007, 10:12 AM

So sad and along with Atomic I understand! It is so sad being lonly and no one understanding you, it sad and some times i feel as if i'm not complete. Keep up the great work! i like your work and how sometimes how it relates to myself!

bratling · Nov 05, 2007, 10:25 AM

Thank you both for the lovely comments. Your both my favorite commenters. You guys and Rayme.

I feel, like a ghost, Incomplete and see through. Really exposed and vulnrible and incomplete. I'm glad you can identify with this aswell. It's always more comforting to not be alone.
My neice is trying really hard to type to you too. By the way. (She's six months.

)

highteckdudu · Nov 05, 2007, 10:28 AM

Cute! I like to know that we are your fav! *wispers* (must be a minnesota thing). lol =^.^=

bratling · Nov 05, 2007, 10:29 AM

Must be. <3 for midwesterners.We wrawk. Oh and we speak more proper english then the rest of the country too. how ya' like THEM apples?!

Sazzy · Nov 05, 2007, 10:49 AM

that poem is really well writen

I think it places it lost its rhyme a little but it didn't matter too much, it came back anyway.

highteckdudu · Nov 05, 2007, 11:11 AM

Yeah i aggree! And I prefer peaches! Lol! better than apples!

Tifa Lockhart · Nov 05, 2007, 11:50 AM

Mm, a nice poem indeed. I like it. Keep up the great work! ^^

bratling · Nov 05, 2007, 12:29 PM

Tee-hee. Peach would be glad to hear that Highteck, but I donno if you met her yet! Sazzy, it lost the rhyme because it wasn't really intentional in the first place, so it happened. But I didn't MAKE it happen when it did.

Thank you all though for your comments. I appriciate them all.

highteckdudu · Nov 05, 2007, 12:46 PM

Peach? humm... nope the name doesent seem to cross my mind at this moment! oh well!

Nov 05, 2007, 09:53 AM	#1 (permalink)
bratling Devoted Otaku Join Date: May 2007 Location: Crystal Minnesota. Posts: 509 Thanks: 0 Thanked 17 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 11,826	Couldn't,can't I can't believe, I can't forget. The things they've done. The things I regret. I can't forgive, Because I still see. Every little thing, That's ever been done to me. It makes me bitter, And more then suspicious. I scream, I hit. I bite, I throw dishes. Tantrum after tantrum, THat you've endured. You really should, Think about getting insured. You call her crazy. But she's got nothing on me. Loss of control. Loss of self. I just wanna be someone else. Even if it's just a while. I wish that I could, Find a real reason to smile. Life and it's lies. Make it feel like pointlessness. Make me revel in my loneliness. Because they'll never get it. They'll never understand. And probably neither will you. Why I couldn't let you, Be my man. __________________ She's always trying not to cry. But I can see the demons in her eyes. She's always trying not to yell. But you see to her, she's trapped in hell.
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atomik_sprout CHUCK NORRIS!!! Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Minneapolis, MN Posts: 2,087 Thanks: 55 Thanked 69 Times in 64 Posts Credits: 110,749	Re: Couldn't,can't I understand, Chan. Believe me, I do. It's just a bit painful to know why things are the way they are. I'm sorry... for everything. I like this poem, it's well written. __________________ http://www.myspace.com/boondocksamurai
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highteckdudu Where the journey begins! Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: The wonderfull world of Minnesota! And I mean that! Posts: 595 Thanks: 3 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts Credits: 155,707	Re: Couldn't,can't So sad and along with Atomic I understand! It is so sad being lonly and no one understanding you, it sad and some times i feel as if i'm not complete. Keep up the great work! i like your work and how sometimes how it relates to myself! __________________ I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass! Visit www.highteckdudu.webs.com!
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bratling Devoted Otaku Join Date: May 2007 Location: Crystal Minnesota. Posts: 509 Thanks: 0 Thanked 17 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 11,826	Re: Couldn't,can't Thank you both for the lovely comments. Your both my favorite commenters. You guys and Rayme. I feel, like a ghost, Incomplete and see through. Really exposed and vulnrible and incomplete. I'm glad you can identify with this aswell. It's always more comforting to not be alone. My neice is trying really hard to type to you too. By the way. (She's six months. ) __________________ She's always trying not to cry. But I can see the demons in her eyes. She's always trying not to yell. But you see to her, she's trapped in hell.
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bratling Devoted Otaku Join Date: May 2007 Location: Crystal Minnesota. Posts: 509 Thanks: 0 Thanked 17 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 11,826	Re: Couldn't,can't Must be. <3 for midwesterners.We wrawk. Oh and we speak more proper english then the rest of the country too. how ya' like THEM apples?! __________________ She's always trying not to cry. But I can see the demons in her eyes. She's always trying not to yell. But you see to her, she's trapped in hell.
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Sazzy Member of 22 yr old Club Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: In my imagination restricted by British Society! Posts: 1,798 Thanks: 7 Thanked 15 Times in 12 Posts Credits: 32,471	Re: Couldn't,can't that poem is really well writen I think it places it lost its rhyme a little but it didn't matter too much, it came back anyway. __________________ FAVOURITE THREADS EXPLAIN why, or risk an infraction. *Will no long use any signatures.. only on forums that appreciate my effort.*
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highteckdudu Where the journey begins! Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: The wonderfull world of Minnesota! And I mean that! Posts: 595 Thanks: 3 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts Credits: 155,707	Re: Couldn't,can't Yeah i aggree! And I prefer peaches! Lol! better than apples! __________________ I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass! Visit www.highteckdudu.webs.com!
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Tifa Lockhart Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Nibelheim Posts: 150 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 2,687	Re: Couldn't,can't Mm, a nice poem indeed. I like it. Keep up the great work! ^^
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bratling Devoted Otaku Join Date: May 2007 Location: Crystal Minnesota. Posts: 509 Thanks: 0 Thanked 17 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 11,826	Re: Couldn't,can't Tee-hee. Peach would be glad to hear that Highteck, but I donno if you met her yet! Sazzy, it lost the rhyme because it wasn't really intentional in the first place, so it happened. But I didn't MAKE it happen when it did. Thank you all though for your comments. I appriciate them all. __________________ She's always trying not to cry. But I can see the demons in her eyes. She's always trying not to yell. But you see to her, she's trapped in hell.
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