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    Couldn't,can't

    I can't believe,
    I can't forget.

    The things they've done.
    The things I regret.

    I can't forgive,
    Because I still see.

    Every little thing,
    That's ever been done to me.

    It makes me bitter,
    And more then suspicious.

    I scream, I hit.
    I bite, I throw dishes.

    Tantrum after tantrum,
    THat you've endured.

    You really should,
    Think about getting insured.

    You call her crazy.
    But she's got nothing on me.

    Loss of control.
    Loss of self.

    I just wanna be someone else.
    Even if it's just a while.

    I wish that I could,
    Find a real reason to smile.

    Life and it's lies.
    Make it feel like pointlessness.

    Make me revel in my loneliness.
    Because they'll never get it.

    They'll never understand.
    And probably neither will you.

    Why I couldn't let you,
    Be my man.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: Couldn't,can't

    I understand, Chan. Believe me, I do. It's just a bit painful to know why things are the way they are. I'm sorry... for everything.

    I like this poem, it's well written.


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    Re: Couldn't,can't

    So sad and along with Atomic I understand! It is so sad being lonly and no one understanding you, it sad and some times i feel as if i'm not complete. Keep up the great work! i like your work and how sometimes how it relates to myself!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Thank you both for the lovely comments. Your both my favorite commenters. You guys and Rayme. I feel, like a ghost, Incomplete and see through. Really exposed and vulnrible and incomplete. I'm glad you can identify with this aswell. It's always more comforting to not be alone.
    My neice is trying really hard to type to you too. By the way. (She's six months. )

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Cute! I like to know that we are your fav! *wispers* (must be a minnesota thing). lol =^.^=
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Must be. <3 for midwesterners.We wrawk. Oh and we speak more proper english then the rest of the country too. how ya' like THEM apples?!

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    Re: Couldn't,can't

    that poem is really well writen I think it places it lost its rhyme a little but it didn't matter too much, it came back anyway.
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    Yeah i aggree! And I prefer peaches! Lol! better than apples!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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