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    A couple of my poems

    [Independence]
    You're told to roll with the punches
    Go with the flow
    But life's so hard
    You wanna scream 'NO!'
    Are you blind?
    It ain't that easy
    With all these choices
    It makes you queasy
    You got to be strong
    Be able to love
    You've got to listen
    But be your own dove.

    [NoName]
    The sound of your voice
    is a whisper in the wind
    the feel of your lips
    lingering on my skin.

    the sweet taste of your love
    caught me to easily
    i feel like im flying, high above
    this poem doesnt rhyme well, its so silly.

    dreams upon dreams
    the just keep coming
    but were going to pull through this
    i know we can, look at us, still smiling.

    [LovedIt]
    I felt whole in your arms
    but now that your gone
    im falling to pieces
    i cant wait till that time
    where we meet again
    share our time again
    its hard so far away
    missing your touch
    day by day
    i feel like were drifting away
    but i know you're out there
    still holding on, loving me
    I cant seem to find myself anymore
    not even when i look in a mirror
    my heart and soul are missing
    and they're there with you
    lucky little things
    tears are falling now
    have been for a while
    and i cant stop them
    oh but how i wish i could


    [Nothing]
    Save my tears
    lock away my troubles
    forget my fears
    yet the pain doubles.

    quiet screams of pain
    trembing from agony
    life- in a drain
    lagging upon me.

    the marks of shame
    there to haunt me
    everyone's to blame
    but certainly not me.

    love doesn't pertain
    hate doesn't either
    nothing left to gain
    nothing left to desire.


    [Poseidon]
    The seas of rage
    and Poseidon's shores
    can't keep me from
    the ones I adore.

    [To-An EX]
    You're afraid to give away your heart
    But they dont understand
    You give away just a part
    But then your love is a demand

    Love is a strange thing
    You want it so bad but not at all
    Your at the bottom of a peice of string
    Just about ready to fall

    Then you start falling away
    Slowley but surley
    Then you walk astray
    You shut your heart securley

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    Re: A couple of my poems

    omg you are such a good poem writer! I absolutely LOVE all of these poems! Wonderful job!



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    Re: A couple of my poems

    lol thank you soooooo much!!! you're soooooo kind haha

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    Re: A couple of my poems

    Great works azureskye!!!! Be sure to keep it up!!! ^^ I'm always glad to see new wiretrs on AO and active newbies are just great too!!!!

    I really liked these poems!!!! Really!!! My favourites were "Nothing" (just adore it, love it!!!) and "NoName", but that doesn't mean I didn't like the rest, I love them all, these two just cought my attention...

    "Nothing"... I love these dark poems, reading witch you can feel the pain like it's yours... because as well as you capture the good moments, you have to capture the bad, because those are memories just as important... And you can really feel pain and sadness in this one.

    "NoName"? I totaly adore the first line, makes me dream away in an instant moment... such good work with describing!!! and the last line of the second stranza is just in place- it's funny and it shows that the lyrical "me" is a lill... worried about the words he/she says... nice!!! ^^

    "LovedIt" was a poem that I'd expect to be too sweet but came out to be just cool... nice work indeed!!!^^

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    thank you so much!!!!! you are so sweet! i love this site so much already

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    Re: A couple of my poems

    Glad you like it!!! Haha, we got a new poem writer! Hehe, poems are fun to make!



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