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Newbie | A couple of my poems [Independence] You're told to roll with the punches Go with the flow But life's so hard You wanna scream 'NO!' Are you blind? It ain't that easy With all these choices It makes you queasy You got to be strong Be able to love You've got to listen But be your own dove. [NoName] The sound of your voice is a whisper in the wind the feel of your lips lingering on my skin. the sweet taste of your love caught me to easily i feel like im flying, high above this poem doesnt rhyme well, its so silly. dreams upon dreams the just keep coming but were going to pull through this i know we can, look at us, still smiling. [LovedIt] I felt whole in your arms but now that your gone im falling to pieces i cant wait till that time where we meet again share our time again its hard so far away missing your touch day by day i feel like were drifting away but i know you're out there still holding on, loving me I cant seem to find myself anymore not even when i look in a mirror my heart and soul are missing and they're there with you lucky little things tears are falling now have been for a while and i cant stop them oh but how i wish i could [Nothing] Save my tears lock away my troubles forget my fears yet the pain doubles. quiet screams of pain trembing from agony life- in a drain lagging upon me. the marks of shame there to haunt me everyone's to blame but certainly not me. love doesn't pertain hate doesn't either nothing left to gain nothing left to desire. [Poseidon] The seas of rage and Poseidon's shores can't keep me from the ones I adore. [To-An EX] You're afraid to give away your heart But they dont understand You give away just a part But then your love is a demand Love is a strange thing You want it so bad but not at all Your at the bottom of a peice of string Just about ready to fall Then you start falling away Slowley but surley Then you walk astray You shut your heart securley |
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![]() Credits: 12,099 | Re: A couple of my poems omg you are such a good poem writer! I absolutely LOVE all of these poems! Wonderful job! |
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![]() Credits: 49,182 | Re: A couple of my poems Great works azureskye!!!! Be sure to keep it up!!! ^^ I'm always glad to see new wiretrs on AO and active newbies are just great too!!!! I really liked these poems!!!! Really!!! My favourites were "Nothing" (just adore it, love it!!!) and "NoName", but that doesn't mean I didn't like the rest, I love them all, these two just cought my attention... "Nothing"... I love these dark poems, reading witch you can feel the pain like it's yours... because as well as you capture the good moments, you have to capture the bad, because those are memories just as important... And you can really feel pain and sadness in this one. "NoName"? I totaly adore the first line, makes me dream away in an instant moment... such good work with describing!!! and the last line of the second stranza is just in place- it's funny and it shows that the lyrical "me" is a lill... worried about the words he/she says... nice!!! ^^ "LovedIt" was a poem that I'd expect to be too sweet but came out to be just cool... nice work indeed!!!^^ |
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