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Old Jun 29, 2007, 02:01 AM   #1 (permalink)
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A couple of my poems

[Independence]
You're told to roll with the punches
Go with the flow
But life's so hard
You wanna scream 'NO!'
Are you blind?
It ain't that easy
With all these choices
It makes you queasy
You got to be strong
Be able to love
You've got to listen
But be your own dove.

[NoName]
The sound of your voice
is a whisper in the wind
the feel of your lips
lingering on my skin.

the sweet taste of your love
caught me to easily
i feel like im flying, high above
this poem doesnt rhyme well, its so silly.

dreams upon dreams
the just keep coming
but were going to pull through this
i know we can, look at us, still smiling.

[LovedIt]
I felt whole in your arms
but now that your gone
im falling to pieces
i cant wait till that time
where we meet again
share our time again
its hard so far away
missing your touch
day by day
i feel like were drifting away
but i know you're out there
still holding on, loving me
I cant seem to find myself anymore
not even when i look in a mirror
my heart and soul are missing
and they're there with you
lucky little things
tears are falling now
have been for a while
and i cant stop them
oh but how i wish i could


[Nothing]
Save my tears
lock away my troubles
forget my fears
yet the pain doubles.

quiet screams of pain
trembing from agony
life- in a drain
lagging upon me.

the marks of shame
there to haunt me
everyone's to blame
but certainly not me.

love doesn't pertain
hate doesn't either
nothing left to gain
nothing left to desire.


[Poseidon]
The seas of rage
and Poseidon's shores
can't keep me from
the ones I adore.

[To-An EX]
You're afraid to give away your heart
But they dont understand
You give away just a part
But then your love is a demand

Love is a strange thing
You want it so bad but not at all
Your at the bottom of a peice of string
Just about ready to fall

Then you start falling away
Slowley but surley
Then you walk astray
You shut your heart securley
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Old Jun 29, 2007, 02:32 AM   #2 (permalink)
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omg you are such a good poem writer! I absolutely LOVE all of these poems! Wonderful job!
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lol thank you soooooo much!!! you're soooooo kind haha
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Great works azureskye!!!! Be sure to keep it up!!! ^^ I'm always glad to see new wiretrs on AO and active newbies are just great too!!!!

I really liked these poems!!!! Really!!! My favourites were "Nothing" (just adore it, love it!!!) and "NoName", but that doesn't mean I didn't like the rest, I love them all, these two just cought my attention...

"Nothing"... I love these dark poems, reading witch you can feel the pain like it's yours... because as well as you capture the good moments, you have to capture the bad, because those are memories just as important... And you can really feel pain and sadness in this one.

"NoName"? I totaly adore the first line, makes me dream away in an instant moment... such good work with describing!!! and the last line of the second stranza is just in place- it's funny and it shows that the lyrical "me" is a lill... worried about the words he/she says... nice!!! ^^

"LovedIt" was a poem that I'd expect to be too sweet but came out to be just cool... nice work indeed!!!^^
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thank you so much!!!!! you are so sweet! i love this site so much already
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Glad you like it!!! Haha, we got a new poem writer! Hehe, poems are fun to make!
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