nice poem, just a little on the dreary side but i like it.
she covers up the pain
and loves how you see her now
her heart seems all in tact
but inside shes fallen down
she covers up her faults
and masks all of the mistakes
she cant live a lie much longer
this is all that she can take
perfection on the outside
with a bit of sweet sad grace
she drilled you into the ground
and sees tears run down your face
shed never meant to hurt you
someone she cared about so much
her spirit left her heart
and left her body to turn to dust
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nice poem, just a little on the dreary side but i like it.
thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!
dreary is wat i do best...
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That was a good poem. I've felt like that before. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
very awesome poem this points out what alot of people
do when they are hurt they cover the feelings with false truth
to make everyone think there happy ,when in reality i think
everyone can never really cover there feelings forever.
very awesome poem and this is what i get from it
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
CherryBlossom18, ima bout to post some more stuff. this week i bet.. ive got some i havent posted in a while tho
and holder ah
you always get it
to the max!!
love, -k-
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yes. the poet is very good. small talk but rigid inside it
I have and always will love your peoms animechick, nice one. Keep it up.
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