cover up {P}

animechick · Oct 12, 2006, 07:06 PM

she covers up the pain
and loves how you see her now
her heart seems all in tact
but inside shes fallen down

she covers up her faults
and masks all of the mistakes
she cant live a lie much longer
this is all that she can take

perfection on the outside
with a bit of sweet sad grace
she drilled you into the ground
and sees tears run down your face

shed never meant to hurt you
someone she cared about so much
her spirit left her heart
and left her body to turn to dust

*fayt lingod* · Oct 13, 2006, 01:48 PM

nice poem, just a little on the dreary side but i like it.

animechick · Oct 13, 2006, 04:25 PM

dreary is wat i do best...

CherryBlossom18 · Oct 13, 2006, 04:30 PM

That was a good poem. I've felt like that before. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Oct 13, 2006, 06:25 PM

very awesome poem this points out what alot of people
do when they are hurt they cover the feelings with false truth
to make everyone think there happy ,when in reality i think
everyone can never really cover there feelings forever.
very awesome poem and this is what i get from it

animechick · Oct 14, 2006, 06:11 PM

CherryBlossom18, ima bout to post some more stuff. this week i bet.. ive got some i havent posted in a while tho

and holder ah
you always get it
to the max!!

love, -k-

baikuza · Oct 14, 2006, 08:02 PM

yes. the poet is very good. small talk but rigid inside it

*ketaro* · Oct 15, 2006, 07:39 AM

I have and always will love your peoms animechick, nice one. Keep it up.

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animechick is backkk Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: texas Posts: 799 Thanks: 3 Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts Credits: 2,232	cover up {P} she covers up the pain and loves how you see her now her heart seems all in tact but inside shes fallen down she covers up her faults and masks all of the mistakes she cant live a lie much longer this is all that she can take perfection on the outside with a bit of sweet sad grace she drilled you into the ground and sees tears run down your face shed never meant to hurt you someone she cared about so much her spirit left her heart and left her body to turn to dust __________________ sig by SasuraiHell [[*she wanted to be a dancer, now all she wants is to be with you*]] www.myspace.com/mourningtonight
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fayt lingod Guardian of Heaven Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: in front of my computer Posts: 1,502 Thanks: 2 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Credits: 4,155	nice poem, just a little on the dreary side but i like it. __________________ thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy! click here myspace
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animechick is backkk Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: texas Posts: 799 Thanks: 3 Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts Credits: 2,232	dreary is wat i do best... __________________ sig by SasuraiHell [[*she wanted to be a dancer, now all she wants is to be with you*]] www.myspace.com/mourningtonight
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CherryBlossom18 Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun Posts: 578 Thanks: 1 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 2,386	That was a good poem. I've felt like that before. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,797 Thanks: 21 Thanked 21 Times in 20 Posts Credits: 3,320	very awesome poem this points out what alot of people do when they are hurt they cover the feelings with false truth to make everyone think there happy ,when in reality i think everyone can never really cover there feelings forever. very awesome poem and this is what i get from it __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/
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animechick is backkk Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: texas Posts: 799 Thanks: 3 Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts Credits: 2,232	CherryBlossom18, ima bout to post some more stuff. this week i bet.. ive got some i havent posted in a while tho and holder ah you always get it to the max!! love, -k- __________________ sig by SasuraiHell [[*she wanted to be a dancer, now all she wants is to be with you*]] www.myspace.com/mourningtonight
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ketaro Its Over 9000! Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 4,226 Thanks: 27 Thanked 31 Times in 29 Posts Credits: 23,390	Re: cover up {P} I have and always will love your peoms animechick, nice one. Keep it up.
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