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    cover up {P}

    she covers up the pain
    and loves how you see her now
    her heart seems all in tact
    but inside shes fallen down

    she covers up her faults
    and masks all of the mistakes
    she cant live a lie much longer
    this is all that she can take

    perfection on the outside
    with a bit of sweet sad grace
    she drilled you into the ground
    and sees tears run down your face

    shed never meant to hurt you
    someone she cared about so much
    her spirit left her heart
    and left her body to turn to dust
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    nice poem, just a little on the dreary side but i like it.

    thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!

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    dreary is wat i do best...
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    That was a good poem. I've felt like that before. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

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    very awesome poem this points out what alot of people
    do when they are hurt they cover the feelings with false truth
    to make everyone think there happy ,when in reality i think
    everyone can never really cover there feelings forever.
    very awesome poem and this is what i get from it
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    CherryBlossom18, ima bout to post some more stuff. this week i bet.. ive got some i havent posted in a while tho

    and holder ah
    you always get it
    to the max!!

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    yes. the poet is very good. small talk but rigid inside it

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    Re: cover up {P}

    I have and always will love your peoms animechick, nice one. Keep it up.

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