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    Covered by Blood

    I asked DB, and I was told to post my poems in a new thread each time i write a new one, so...

    Why must my vision of reality be so tainted,
    covered by so much blood,
    covered by so much red?
    My solution with everything is quite simple...
    Cut to bleed,
    and all shall fad.
    My religion's salvation is just as simple...
    Believe in him,
    and his blood covers me.
    Why must my vision of reality be so corrupt,
    covered by love of blood,
    covered by love of red?
    My solution with everything is quite simple...
    Beat them,
    and laugh when they bleed.
    My lust for pain is just as simple...
    Hurt with blood,
    and life I gain.
    Why must my vision of reality be so twisted,
    covered by so much blood,
    covered by so much red?
    Last edited by Darkened_Star; Mar 02, 2007 at 08:10 AM.

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    Re: Covered by Blood

    wow....dark and gruesome with saddness to spare......intriguing to the end.
    i enjoyed this poem though it makes me wonder, and worry.
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    Re: Covered by Blood

    this poem really shows your dark side and the
    emotions are really awesome and the anger is
    reallly intence i love it awesome poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Covered by Blood

    Interesting poem, star. There were parts that I was confused, but all in all it's a lovely poem. Continue to write down your deepest thoughts. You will become famous soon enough.

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    Wow!! I like this poem. It reflects quite well you feelings... Sometimes i feel like hurting someone and then laugh at him/her...
    Way to go! Cheers
    I'll look forwar to read another poem of yours!!
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