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    Coy

    I've found the daybreak lingering in your
    pulse, and I've tasted the sugar leaking from your lips.

    Hands lost, eyes scan the dark for a slight
    glimpse of the other, heartbeats race silently.

    The winter air sinks though my skin,
    your warmth calls to me.

    I've found the in-between, it glistens
    in your eyes, it shows in the words you write.

    Slurring my words, the babble erupts from
    my throat, my mouth burning from the inside out.

    The morning bursts through my window
    shades, casting a silohoutte across my sleeping face.
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Coy

    Hmmm... this was really interesting... ^^ I really, really liked it... it's so nice, so immaginative... made me dreamy... a wonderful work I must say ^^

    Only... I couldn't understand these lines:
    "Slurring my words, the babble erupts from
    my throat, my mouth burning from the inside out."
    I really don't and wish you'd explain it to me please, because otherways it's not as enjoyable ^^

    But otherways... this is just great! Wonderful!!!!! ^^ I hope to see more ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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