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    Cracks On A Snow Covered Heart

    Cracks On A Snow Covered Heart...


    Don't leave me alone, I'm so cold without your touch
    Where have you gone, Why did you abandon me
    Is it something I did, Or something I said
    Do you know how lonely I am, Or how much this hurts inside...

    "It hurts to be all alone"

    Being left alone in the snow, Standing out in the cold
    Looking both ways, Wondering when you will show up
    I can't step forward, Not without you
    Alone is what I am, My heart is about to break in half...

    "The cracks are so deep"

    My love for you is so deep, Just as deep as the cuts you made on my heart
    You engraved your name into it, Left a mark I can never be rid of
    I touch it softly and hiss in pain, It's still tender even after all these years
    As you walked away from me, I cried as I held my heart tightly...

    "It's breaking in my palm"

    My throat burns from screaming for you, Your name echos inside my heart and mind
    You invade my dreams, I just want to forget everything about you
    I toss and turn in bed at night, Trying not to dream
    Though my mind begins to fantasise about you, Why are you haunting me...

    "Why do you put me through this pain"

    As I watch the snowy rain, I can't help but to cry
    I see your smile, But it was never meant for me
    You longer want me it seems, Was I not enough for you
    Why did you even bother, Was it all a game to you...

    "Are you just playing with me"

    I wish for death, I whisper for it to come and take me away
    I no longer have the will to live, Not after what you put me through
    So much pain and suffering, I'm sick of it all
    Won't you let death have me, Wil you let me spread my wings...

    "Let death give me the freedom i've so longed for"

    Don't leave me alone, I'm so cold without your touch...so cold
    Where have you gone, Why did you abandon me...i'm all alone
    Is it something I did, Or something I said...what did I do wrong
    Do you know how lonely I am, Or how much this hurts inside...i'm breaking apart...

    "It hurts to be alone, I'm crying on the inside"

    Being left alone in the snow, Standing out in the cold...waiting for you
    Looking both ways, Wondering when you will show up...or if you will
    I can't step forward, Not without you...I can't make it
    Alone is what I am, My heart is about to break in half...break into a million pieces...

    "The cracks are so deep, It's hard to breath"

    I'm all alone in this snow covered world, Crying my eyes out and screaming your name
    Can you not hear the pain in my screams, Or do you just ignore it
    Shivering on the outside, Wishing to die on the inside
    Can I finally spread my wings, Will you let me be free...Am I finally free of you...


    "All alone in this world, I was waiting for you
    You came and then left, I'm all alone once again
    Crying and screaming your name, It wont do me any good
    The cracks on my heart will never heal, No matter what I do
    You marked me so I would be alone, And suffer so much pain
    I spread my wings and leap into the air, I soar into the heavens
    Where I wont be alone, I am finally at peace..."

    "No more cracks on this snow cover heart of mine...I am finally healed...."


    I was listenin 2 some really sad love songs (don't ask why, their just really good songs Lol) and this came 2 me. So I hope that you all enjoy my newest lyrics. Please comment!! ^__^
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Cracks On A Snow Covered Heart

    I love this!! It's sad but beautiful!!

    "The cracks are so deep"

    My love for you is so deep, Just as deep as the cuts you made on my heart
    You engraved your name into it, Left a mark I can never be rid of
    I touch it softly and hiss in pain, It's still tender even after all these years
    As you walked away from me, I cried as I held my heart tightly...

    these are my fav!! the emotions are overflowing! I can imagine the images you put into my mind!!

    A good song/lyrics ^^ I am a big fan of your work ^^
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    Re: Cracks On A Snow Covered Heart

    This is so touching. I've known some loves that have turned out this way and it is very sad. you have really done an amazing job. Bravo sis! This is so sweet!
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    Re: Cracks On A Snow Covered Heart

    Quote Originally Posted by Shinigami's_Angel View Post
    My throat burns from screaming for you, Your name echos inside my heart and mind
    You invade my dreams, I just want to forget everything about you
    I toss and turn in bed at night, Trying not to dream
    Though my mind begins to fantasise about you, Why are you haunting me...

    "Why do you put me through this pain"

    As I watch the snowy rain, I can't help but to cry
    I see your smile, But it was never meant for me
    You longer want me it seems, Was I not enough for you
    Why did you even bother, Was it all a game to you...

    "Are you just playing with me"
    I have to say that I just love the whole thing. But these two stanzas have to be my favorite! I love the feeling and emotion put into these two. There is a couple of lines I have to wonder if you got them from my head.lol You did a great job on the whole thing. It flows well and captures every feeling that you want the reader to feel. I can't wait to read more of your stuff. Keep up the great work.

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