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    Crawling from the inside

    This is a song/poem so it may repeat like a chorous

    This took me some time so i hope you like it...

    The day has come to an end
    The sun is over my head
    My polyamorous friend
    got me in a mass of trouble again

    Just when you think that you're all right
    I'm crawlin out from the inside
    I never heard anyone
    I never listen at all

    They've come to get me again
    The cloud is over my head
    My polyamorous friend
    Got me in a mass of trouble again

    Just when you think that you're all right
    I'm crawlin out from the inside
    I never heard anyone
    I never listen at all
    just stay away from the white light
    I'd say your worst side's your best side
    I never heard anyone
    I never listen at all-

    well how do you know?
    well how do you know?
    well how do you know?
    well how do you know?

    Just when you think that you're all right
    I'm crawlin out from the inside
    I never heard anyone
    I never listen at all
    Just stay away from the white light
    I'd say your worst side's your best side
    I never heard anyone
    I never listen at all


    Hope you like it
    Last edited by Mini Dev; Aug 14, 2007 at 08:48 AM.

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    Re: Crawling from the inside

    Thats like a song... nice Hmm...but...theres too many of it repeated @.@
    too many... :/ it needs more things in it's tummy.. make it fatter with other nutrient as well don't just feed it with the same thing

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    Re: Crawling from the inside

    ok thanks i'll try to rember that in my next one if i get good comments on this one i'll make another one like but we'll see

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    Re: Crawling from the inside

    O.O I liked it
    the crawling out from the inside part is very catchy but I didnt unerstand what you mean by "I never heard anyone
    I never listen at all"
    it seemed a lil out of place

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    Re: Crawling from the inside

    Hmm, I like it... I wish I could hear it in song form. Im not sure that it repeats to much, alot of songs are like that. Infact I really didnt see much of a problem with this at all.
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