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    Create for me.

    MMMmmm... its like extacy.
    I get chills just by havin' you next to me.

    Its not how you look.
    Or how you dress.
    Just create for me.
    I'll be impressed.

    Only thing to bring the sensation.
    Is when you can stimulate me with good conversation.
    Perhaps let me be an inspiration.
    For one of your creations.

    Draw me a picture.
    Grab a guitar.
    Sing me a song.
    Under the stars.

    Write me a poem.
    Or even a lyric.
    Show me something
    that will awaken my spirit!

    Paint with me.
    You start, I'll finish.
    Our colors swirl together.
    Our problems deminish.

    Sit down at my piano.
    with me beside you.
    Each key reveals my soul,
    And who it is tied to.

    Lets sing together.
    A song that only we know.
    Help me remember.
    Help me let go.

    Sketch in my pad.
    I'll sketch in yours.
    We don't have to burn bridges.
    We can open doors.

    So..
    create for me.
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    Re: Create for me.

    Very well written, 'ber. I like this one alot. Keep up the good work! ^_^


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    Re: Create for me.

    Quote Originally Posted by atomik_sprout View Post
    Very well written, 'ber. I like this one alot. Keep up the good work! ^_^
    You think so? I just wrote it in the spur of the moment. Ya'know.. just a lil something to slightly increase my post count. my poor, pathetic 'lil post count.
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    Re: Create for me.

    you think yours is pathetic look at mine and ive been here for a while lol


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    Re: Create for me.

    This poem is so cool!!! It's so catchy to read really! I mean I could just read it over and over again with so much amazement! I love it really so I hope to see more!
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    Re: Create for me.

    A perfect poem, I think! ^^ Nicely written, full of love, made me all dreamy and happy... love it!!! I love every single thing about this poem... it's perfect!!!! Something like this is why I party around the Poem section so much...
    I'll be waiting forward for more! ^^

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    Re: Create for me.

    It's really very cute poem ..and you explain all the your thoughts in it like you make a pic for it ...I love it ..keep it up..

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    Re: Create for me.

    Oh wow, thank you everybody! I had no idea this would grab anyones attention... perhaps I should write spur of the moment more often?
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