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    Crimson Lust Continued

    My teeth withdraw she hits the
    floor and die's so quickly ,how fragile
    she was no remorse do i have,just
    a craving for more.

    How i wish she would have
    been stronger,fought back a bit
    as she satisfied my lust for
    blood ,but she faded
    away like a star in the
    sky when it dies.

    I walk away as you lay there
    cold and lifeless,the thirst
    i crave its undeniable,i see
    her walking under the moon
    my next victim could it be you?

    My teeth withdraw she hits the
    floor and die's so quicly ,how fragile
    she was no remorse do i have,just
    a craving for more.

    How i wish she would have
    stronger,fought back a bit
    as satisfied my lust for
    blood ,but she faded
    away like a star in the
    sky when it dies.

    I walk away as you lay there
    cold and lifeless,the thirst
    i crave its undeniable,i see
    her walking under the moon
    my next victim could it be you?

    Her flesh excites me as i
    smell her life as i draw near
    to satisfy my lust, she screams
    and i muffle her sounds as i
    plung my teeth into her throat.

    She fights and then it's all done
    as her sweet red nectar goes
    down my throat i get a high
    from the smell of her fear as she
    slowly starts fading away.


    she was like the other as my lust
    is satisfied but it never really is,
    my lust for that crimson continues
    as it will never go away, i have no
    regret for the lives that i take because
    that lust must be satisfied
    Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Oct 07, 2006 at 05:35 PM.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Hey Bro!

    Dark poem, and an excellent name for it too! I can actually picture myself watching as the life drains out of you victims in this poem! Excellent job Bro! 5 out of 5 from me!

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    thank bro im glad you liked and its cool you could picture it
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    NIce poem holder, i never thought that you were so freaking good in poetry. Keep it up man.

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    thanks ketar i will i did this poem as contuation from the
    first poem i wrote a while back,i might keep hte pome going
    but not sure yet, and thanks for the comment
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    ya knoi reallt took a liking to this one. i lvoe how you told it more as a sotry then as a formatted poem. it gave it more depth.. and it was so true
    "i have no
    regret for the lives that i take because
    that lust must be satisfied"
    is so true. many times we have all been guilty of "killing" to get whatever it was we wanted. so true and bluntly stated. good job here
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    im scared now.
    but i like it holderofdarkchalice it's nice. very vampireish!

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    Makes me really thirsty...........I liked how you described it all.....Give it a violin sound track and you'd be set.
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