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    thanks princess and TD im glad you liked it i was
    hoping it went over well and it did, i might just make
    a continuing poem from this but i will wait and see,
    thanks for the comments
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    That was a great poem It's perfect for Halloween. I could see that happening to someone in a movie or on tv. You've done a terriffic job as usuall. It was a very dark and mysterious poem and I look forward to reading more of your work.

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    Dang HolderOfTheDarkChalice, that was awsome. Vampireish poem hmmm.. Very wicked and perfect. I feel close to this poem, being a vampire and all ;[ ^^ Great job, keep it up!!

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    Wow that was great! Thanks for letting me read before you posted. Keep up the great work, and yeah I could picture it great as well!
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    Hey Bro I see you poem has caught the attention of a lot of people! Great Job once again!

    Your AO bro 4 Life

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    Wow!! That was soooooooooooo awesome big bro!!! That was such an awesome dark poem about vampire's.Just what I need 2 read 2 get into the spirt of halloween.I just loved this! Awesome job once again big bro!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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