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    Crimson Lust part 7

    .A single drop of water hits the floor as the
    shadows fill the room memories of a life never
    lived pass through his mind as another night
    takes hold and his lust comes alive.

    Winds blow as he drifts through the night
    looking , searching, never resting in hopes
    of finding something that would make the night
    worth it all , hearing laughter from a far he
    follows the the sweet smell of life.

    She stands there laughing as he approaches
    memories overwhelm him from a life that left
    him a face comes to mind like a flame consuming
    flesh slowly , the words I LOVE YOU scream through
    his mind .

    he comes to as she lays there cold and silent
    the laughter gone never again to bring joy , no
    more will there be any feelings , sadness overcomes
    him as the limp body lay there reminding him of a love
    that slipped from him in another lifetime.

    Time flies as he hunger is almost satisfied though
    the lust for life has a bitter taste tonight , the memories
    almost take what he loves away to where the hunt becomes
    painful and remorseful.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Crimson Lust part 7

    Interesting use of narrative one who bears the dark chalice. This prose poem is rarely used but here ou channel a dark yet recurring theme through the ages. The vision of one you love who is gone.

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