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    Crimson Lust PT.4

    Blood dripping lightly to the floor as
    teeth wet with saliva and that sweet
    crimson drop to her neck her light moans
    seem to fade in a sensual way as her eyes
    slowly close.

    He grins as he licks his deep red lips
    lusting for more as he releases his grip
    from her shoulder let her hit the floor hard
    and her body goes limp and cold , he lusts
    so much for that crimson that he makes a
    romantic game from it.

    He rises to his feet still looking down
    as the smile slowly goes to a frown
    as he realises she wasn't enough he sighs
    as he walks towards the night as it begins
    to fade thinking to himself if that taste he
    needs so badly is worth it after all.

    The cock crows as the sky turns a light blue
    and he stands there almost daring fate to take
    him as he jump form the window and goes to his
    sanctaury for one more day to come in to play
    for more people to think of the horrors that lurk i
    n the night.

    this is part 4 of a on going poem/story as i
    keep thinking of other ideas i will use them here
    but any comments or sugestions are welcomed.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Crimson Lust PT.4

    This series gets better with every part. I liked how he took all her crimson from her body and still longed for more. It sounds like a romantic horror movie. I can't wait to read part 5.
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    Re: Crimson Lust PT.4

    This poem you made, is really descriptive. It makes the reader visualize every word that this poem imparts. I agree with cherry, this poem feels like romantic yet scary. Love is thus scary at times... this poem depicts obsession with passsion. I liked the way this poem was presented, it is a special type. Keep up the good work. ^^

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