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    Crimson Pain

    Another day and list thread
    now whys or how's or even
    a reasonable statement that
    makes the thread that great.
    typing away so care free.

    How bliss full it must be to let
    ones mind wonder so carelessly
    but beware the crimson pain the
    one that that destroys all hope
    of having comments maid on you
    awesome thread.

    Now that being i must confess
    that even i tread not on that which
    would bring such wrath , to long has it
    been since it has taken a thread and
    torn it asunder , the beat sleeps as
    you walk about unaware of the doom that
    could befall you.

    So in closing i will say this post wisely
    and most delegently with common sense
    and all will be well for you thread for many
    to see , but be mindful of the things i have
    said or the vengeance of the beast will bare
    all its fury on you.

    This poem is for those who think posting questionable
    threads and makng list threads with out a why to them
    because i fare warning should be issued so you want
    feel that painfull crimson death.
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    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Crimson Pain

    Very stern poem giving fair warning to all the people who do wrong. It makes a bold statement which is a new thing for you to. I like it.
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    Re: Crimson Pain

    Scary poem... I bet everyone will think twice before starting a thread... hmm... I guess I'll think ten times then...
    if we talk about the poem itslef then i didn't like the fact that you bring the text in a new line somewhere in the middle of the sentence... it always confuses me sooooooooo much!!!! Everything else was great, i think!

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