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    A Cruise Part 3

    Fear overtook Alex as he watch the man infront of him. The man said nothing he just stood there holding the pistol. The pistol was aimed for Alex's head, if he tried anything he would be dead in less then a second. He wondered why he decided to do this in the first place. He could of just kill the first one and just stayed in his room. Alex regreted doing this now.

    The man examined Alex carefully. "Who are you" asked the man. "Alex Raine" said Alex. The man continued to examine Alex. "How old are you Alex" asked the man. "Fourteen" he responded. The man nodded. "Then i take it your not with them" said the man lowering the gun.

    Alex didn't know what was going on. "Who are you" he asked the man. "My name is Jack Dirre, i work for the CIA" he said walking to the window. Jack looked out the window the make sure no other terrorists were coming. "Whats going on" asked Alex. "Just what it looks like, Terrorist took over this ship" said Jack.

    "The CIA knew that this would happen so thats why i am here. They placed one CIA agents per cruiser liner. If we knew that they would have this many on one ship we would of placed more agents" explained Jack. "How many are there" asked Alex. "Twenty, twenty well armed and protected terrorist" said Jack.

    "So there are only eighteen left" said Alex sitting down on the bed. He was glad he could rest for a bit. Jack looked at Alex with disbelief in his eyes. "You, killed two of them" asked Jack. Alex nodded. Jack shook his head. He couldn't believe it, Alex was just a kid and yet he was doing a better job at this then he was. "What are we going to do" asked Alex.

    "You're going to stay here. I'm going to go and try to stop them" said Jack. Alex stood up. "No, i am coming with you" said Alex with a stern voice. Jack knew that he couldn't do anything to change Alex's mind. "Alright but i'm not going to look after you, so if you die its not my fault" said Jack not wanting Alex to come. "I understand that" he said picking up his MP5. He placed his nightvision goggles back on and waited for Jack to get ready.

    Jack picked up a brief case and placed it on the bed. He opened it and picked something up. Jack was holding a M4 rifle. Fully automatic with a silencer and scope. The rounds the M4 had was alot stronger then the one in Alex's MP5. They walked out of the room. It was raining alot harder then before. Alex placed his Nightvision goggles and he started to see thing's clearer. Jack was at a disadvantage because he didn't have any.

    "Listen up, i will go to the right and you go to the left" said Jack. Alex nodded and started to walk down the left of the hallway. He walked forward untill he got to a corner. He pressed himself against the wall as he approched the corner. He quickly turned the corner. There was no one in front of him. He began to run down the side of the ship.

    To be continued in Part 4.

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    Re: A Cruise Part 3

    Wow so much drama and actions is awesome!!



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: A Cruise Part 3

    thank you, i think A Cruise will end with Part 5 not sure yet though.

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    Re: A Cruise Part 3

    Quote Originally Posted by shadowxalex View Post
    thank you, i think A Cruise will end with Part 5 not sure yet though.
    u should keep it going on cuz it has a great storie line from begining and end.



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: A Cruise Part 3

    Thank you, but i really think that A Cruise will end with part 5 but i will make Alex Raine into a series, so you will see him in later stories.

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    Re: A Cruise Part 3

    Quote Originally Posted by shadowxalex View Post
    Thank you, but i really think that A Cruise will end with part 5 but i will make Alex Raine into a series, so you will see him in later stories.
    sweet!
    ill be waiting for ur new realease cant wait
    and if made 1 uncuted seens pm em to me



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: A Cruise Part 3

    Love it!!!! I forgot to post my comment
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