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    Re: crush

    i love the poem
    great concept

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    Re: crush

    Very nice flow i really love this poem it has emotions and rytheme a great job ^_^
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    Re: crush

    This is a cute little poem by a cute little girl, very cute...but sometimes I get confused reading the sentences...they are jumbled up, lol not sure if u meant to do that, anyways, good job, do it again,

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    Re: crush

    i dont know if i will put on another poem do you think i should
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    ok i will post a new poem soon k ^__^
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    Re: crush

    Quote Originally Posted by equinn
    crush

    Pardon me, I do believe,
    That you've just looked my way.
    And if I"m not mistaken,
    I hear what your eyes do say.
    They brighten when I am near,
    And quiver when we speak-
    Could it possibly be,
    That you feel something for me?
    Though I'm quite unsure
    Where this would lead,
    I do know one thing-
    You've already planted the seed.
    Your eyes, they seem to me,
    So wanting yet so meek.
    What is it exactly
    From me that you seek?
    Say the words and I shall reply.
    Courage, young man, Give it a try!
    For I'm much weaker
    Than I might seem,
    What my eyes beg,
    Please do deem.
    that was the best poem i have read today!!! It kept me hooked on reading more of it.. i hope there is a continuation where it would speak more about what has happened
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    Re: crush

    you liked it then see my other one *the act of waiting*

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    Re: crush

    It's beautiful. I sometimes wonder if the guy I like likes me back. That's what this reminded me of. The way I always catch his glance in the hallway... at least I think so. I'm not really sure.

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    Re: crush

    WoW that is really impressive keep it up

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