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    Re: crush?

    Nice poem...your good!!! Better luck next time for your lovelife. Sometimes...he's just not for you. Maybe you will find love with other person/s.

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    Re: crush?

    Well...
    If we could rate 1-10 in posts, I'd give you a 10!
    Lol, you should PM me who you feel that way about...
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    Could it be me?

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    I'm sorry but i did not like it all, and i think they were trying to be nice, but i prefer constructive criticism over lie'n through my teeth.

    OK, poetry doesnt have to be forced into rhyming, When you are writing let it breeze out of you and it will develop a rhythm of its own

    and the consistant last word rhyming to a previous word should be done when necessary, so that's when u relize that you did it unintentionally. But some people can pull off the word play. I think that should be for experienced writers.

    But try using the same feeling. But say what you mean, and ignore rhyming.

    Cool!

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    Re: crush?

    hurray for pie-chan!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    *hugs*
    nice poem~~~
    keep it up!!!
    i await for more! XD
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    Re: crush?

    @jervyn555-thankies! yes, u r true about he may not be the one. i have a whole future ahead of me

    @Mega.Herz-thankies again! it may be u or it maybe someone else. no one knows, lol
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    @Nympho-i do know what u mean, i made this poem a while ago. so i didn't change it. thanks 4 being honest. though i'm just a middle schooler, not really experienced, so yeah.

    Lol, thankies sis
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    Re: crush?

    This is one of those poems that applies to all those crazy people who are madly in love withsome one and wont stop till they pass away. lol I liked it, It was a good poem!

    Seriously you have talent!!

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    @The Fighter-though it really showed that i was tring 2 rhyme w/ it. *sweat*


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