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Oct 19, 2007, 04:24 PM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: May 2007 Location: Where the angels play
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 Credits: 10,233 | Crush.... CRUSH..... I get nervous... When i see you walk the hallways, I get scared.... When i see you looking at me And i feel weak in the knees When you walk towards me Inside I wonder... Why Is my heart beating go fast As my face turns red And my eyes look away While my legs seem to disappear I don't understand this feeling... And when you reach me You take my hand and kiss it Before gazing into my eyes And kissing my lips I open my eyes and i stare at the ceiling Realizing my feelings are only me crushing Because the feelings in my heart Will never be told to you... ... My crush well it's been a while since i have written a poem..hope you'll enjoy this. (p.s. thxs for the people who helped me) 
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Oct 19, 2007, 04:34 PM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: In a house. ._.
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Credits: 6,397 |  Re: Crush.... ^_^ Awww, It's very sweet sis! So much love emotion  You're poem was like you were imagining everything while hoping it would happen...But...no, It's awesome!  My favourite verse was this one..... Quote:
 ^_^ -Zainab
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Oct 20, 2007, 10:47 AM
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| ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart
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Credits: 13,226 | Re: Crush.... So adorable really!!! I think it's very romantic and you and your sweetheat will ended up together so yah you!!! ^^ My favorite line you put was in this paragraph Quote:
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Oct 20, 2007, 10:50 AM
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| Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Location: Where the angels play
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Credits: 10,233 | Re: Crush.... thanks for the wonderful replies! i am happy u guys enjoyed the poem. thxs kuwi and zainab for showing me ur guys favorite parts. thxs again angelic! and thxs shi-kun i will ask if i need help with the next one.
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Oct 20, 2007, 11:58 AM
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Credits: 59,118 | Re: Crush.... The flow kinda interupted here.. :/ "Inside I wonder... Why Is my heart beating go fast As my face turns red And my eyes look away While my legs seem to disappear " and i dont get the part with the legs dissapearing  Hmm...a good poem.. nicely done ^^ |
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Oct 20, 2007, 12:00 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough  | Re: Crush.... Quote:
that poem is so correct lol uhm.... my poems are about being emo | |
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Oct 31, 2007, 06:16 PM
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Credits: 1,870 | Re: Crush.... I think it is a great poem it is alot different then what i write alot different Quote:
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Nov 01, 2007, 02:25 PM
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| Angelic  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms
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Credits: 49,192 | Re: Crush.... Quote:
Anyways... I really liked this poem Ryoma ^^ it's sweet and cute and a little bit of sad too... It was really interesting to feel like having a crush again (your descriptions were just so good that I really could imagine it) Again... nice work! I hope to see more! Hugs to ya! (That guy doesn't know what he's missing) | |
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