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    Crush....

    CRUSH.....

    I get nervous...
    When i see you walk the hallways,
    I get scared....
    When i see you looking at me
    And i feel weak in the knees
    When you walk towards me

    Inside I wonder...
    Why
    Is my heart beating go fast
    As my face turns red
    And my eyes look away
    While my legs seem to disappear

    I don't understand this feeling...
    And when you reach me
    You take my hand and kiss it
    Before gazing into my eyes
    And kissing my lips

    I open my eyes and i stare at the ceiling
    Realizing my feelings are only me crushing
    Because the feelings in my heart
    Will never be told to you...
    ... My crush

    well it's been a while since i have written a poem..hope you'll enjoy this.
    (p.s. thxs for the people who helped me)
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    Re: Crush....

    *smiles* I'm glad for helping and that you like it. I think your crush will too. Keep up the great work^-^

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    Smile Re: Crush....

    ^_^

    Awww,

    It's very sweet sis! So much love emotion
    You're poem was like you were imagining everything while hoping it would happen...But...no,

    It's awesome!



    My favourite verse was this one.....
    Inside I wonder...
    Why
    Is my heart beating go fast
    As my face turns red
    And my eyes look away
    While my legs seem to disappear
    The highlighted lines were giving a really nice feeling.

    ^_^

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    Re: Crush....

    it was awesome, and if you needed help, i wouldve deffinately helped you, but yea, i loved it

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    Re: Crush....

    So adorable really!!! I think it's very romantic and you and your sweetheat will ended up together so yah you!!! ^^
    My favorite line you put was in this paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by ryomakurosaki View Post
    I don't understand this feeling...
    And when you reach me
    You take my hand and kiss it
    Before gazing into my eyes
    And kissing my lips
    So I wish to see more of you work so yah!

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    Re: Crush....

    thanks for the wonderful replies! i am happy u guys enjoyed the poem. thxs kuwi and zainab for showing me ur guys favorite parts. thxs again angelic! and thxs shi-kun i will ask if i need help with the next one.
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    Re: Crush....

    The flow kinda interupted here.. :/

    "Inside I wonder...
    Why
    Is my heart beating go fast
    As my face turns red
    And my eyes look away
    While my legs seem to disappear "

    and i dont get the part with the legs dissapearing

    Hmm...a good poem.. nicely done ^^

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    Re: Crush....

    Quote Originally Posted by ryomakurosaki View Post
    CRUSH.....

    I get nervous...
    When i see you walk the hallways,
    I get scared....
    When i see you looking at me
    And i feel weak in the knees
    When you walk towards me

    Inside I wonder...
    Why
    Is my heart beating go fast
    As my face turns red
    And my eyes look away
    While my legs seem to disappear

    I don't understand this feeling...
    And when you reach me
    You take my hand and kiss it
    Before gazing into my eyes
    And kissing my lips

    I open my eyes and i stare at the ceiling
    Realizing my feelings are only me crushing
    Because the feelings in my heart
    Will never be told to you...
    ... My crush

    well it's been a while since i have written a poem..hope you'll enjoy this.
    (p.s. thxs for the people who helped me)
    lol i get that way
    that poem is so correct lol uhm.... my poems are about being emo

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