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    Red face Cry

    CRY

    sometimes i just cant cry.
    I always hold back my tears
    back and i dont know y.

    I always seem to hide my pain
    but it always ends up the same.

    I dig a deeper hole
    then i burie my sed soul.

    Whe i dont cry people think i just care
    but in side im crying so much its hard to bear.

    I show pain i different ways.
    so if i dont cry you'll understad why.

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    Re: Cry

    holding back your tears is the koolest thing you can do. nice poem.

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    Re: Cry

    it is proving that you are strong and you learned how to control your feelings ohhh and nice poem

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    Re: Cry

    thanks, i was told that it is not good for you

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    Re: Cry

    It all depends...

    I cry a lot, I have been picked on for a long time...

    I am emotional and sensitive...

    Crying is good to relieve certain feelings that are overwhelming, but it is bad to be so overwhelmed that you cannot get over them.

    Once the moment is over you have to move on and get by and doing your best to resolve the problem or just letting it go if it cannot be resolved no matter what. Things that cannot be resolved turns often around others and not yourself. You can always change yourself or find another way. But if someone else does not want to change or find another way, you can do nothing about it...nothing. You can help, but no further.

    People stoped picking on my when they matured and took their lives more seriously. I may still be prone to get picked on, but I'm learing little by little to have more self-confidence in myself to surpass who I am.

    Hidding your feelings by forcing tears to not come out is like someone blocking their ears to not hear the screaming all around them. It's like clogging your nose so that it doesn't smell a bad odor. It's like taking away your sense of touch to not feel any physical pain. It's like blindfolding you to not see the horrors that you might see. It's like removing your taste to not have a bitter taste in your mouth. Blocking away your feelings no matter what the means is like taking away a part of yourself.

    I'm not saying it's bad to control your emotions, I am just saying that it is bad to completely block anything in any case. Often people say that you have to face your fears. not run away from them. If you manage to feel what is thrown at you and resolve the problem without becoming numb, then that's the way to go.

    Example:

    Someone is screaming names at you that hurt you. What will you do?

    A. Let the person scream while you keep everything in without saying a word.

    B. Let the person scream while you let everything out without saying a word.

    C. Try to make the person stop, but being overwhelmed by your emotions to the point of becoming harmed by him.

    D. Try to make the person stop, while controlling your emotions to help you face him.

    I'd pick D any time, but not everyone can face someone and control their emotions. That's why you have to learn through life experiences and always stand back up to go on in life.

    Crying isn't so bad, I do it often when things get hard. But getting through a hard time always brings me back on my feet, yet getting back up isn't always easy. No matter what people say that crying is bad or not, just make up your own mind and live by it, listen to yourself first, not second.
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    Re: Cry

    There r a few grammatical errors here and there. Some statements dont make sense... but overall I understand the meaning behind the poem.

    Reflect, Practice, Improve. You'll get there. ^_^
    Last edited by Reese; May 27, 2006 at 11:59 PM.

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    Re: Cry

    well other than that great job *claps* keep it up


    Thank you soooo much equinn for leting me us this pic of your!!!!!

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