Cry

KimiFemi · Mar 17, 2007, 12:33 PM

I can't believe these
Feeling I have for you
They tear me up inside
And now that you won't talk to me
It makes me want to cry

You could never guess it
The pain your silence brings
Now my face is wet
And my eyes sting

... What is happening to me?

The thought of you used to bring me joy
And now theres only sorrow
but this can't last for long
Clear sunny skies lie ahead for tomorrow

... Now if I could only get through the night ...

*equinn* · Mar 17, 2007, 12:53 PM

aww that is sooo sad that minds me ages ago i told some one i liked them and he neaver talked to me again ( still hasnt talked to me) but get job putin that in a poem i know its had to put them into words. 10/10 ^__^

KimiFemi · Mar 17, 2007, 12:57 PM

>.< thanks Equinn
it's an old poem
yeah it was tough but turned out it was a mistake at the time
but the emotion was still real
in the end though
we're still good friends lol
for about 4 years now lol

*equinn* · Mar 17, 2007, 01:05 PM

awww sooo sweet ^__^ the one i told dont talk to me anymore >_<
but yeah im sure it was hard its hard for every one that type of thing and the poem was soo sad yet had a meaning to it

Aqua chic · Mar 17, 2007, 01:14 PM

thast sounds kinda like me.i gave this guy a hint i liked him, and he called me a fag and a geek. i liked him for about a year... i got over him tho (like last week)

KimiFemi · Mar 17, 2007, 03:10 PM

why would he say such a stupid thing?
glad you got over him >.<
he's obviously an idiot lol
guys are so weird
if you dont like a girl that likes you
just take the compliment and say
sorry dont like you like that
no need for insults
or to aviod the person completely
we Can handle the truth
*rolls eyes*
I have no problem telling a guy I don't like him lol
but being nice about it

*koga23* · Mar 17, 2007, 03:14 PM

Not all guys are weird well not me im normal

B/w nice poem kimi i like it

P.R. Princess · Mar 17, 2007, 03:25 PM

this iI really like it. I'm glad you two r still friends. It's better that way.(^.^)

*ketaro* · Mar 17, 2007, 03:56 PM

Hey that was a kool peom KimiFemi. It was well written.

KimiFemi · Mar 17, 2007, 05:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by koga23

Not all guys are weird well not me im normal

B/w nice poem kimi i like it

Oh but Koga your the weirdest of them all!!!
lol! J/K don't look at me like that!! *runs*
lol but thanks! glad you liked it

Quote:

Originally Posted by P.R. Princes

this iI really like it. I'm glad you two r still friends. It's better that way.(^.^)

yeah me too >.< lol
he's actually my best guy frined ever so it worked out great lol

Quote:

Originally Posted by ketaro

Hey that was a kool peom KimiFemi. It was well written.

You think?
I wasnt too sure about the way I put it together
but then I wasn't going to change it again lol

*koga23* · Mar 17, 2007, 07:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KimiFemi

Oh but Koga your the weirdest of them all!!!
lol! J/K don't look at me like that!! *runs*
lol but thanks! glad you liked it

Awww that hurt and after i left such a nice comment too v.v

But yes very nice poem

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KimiFemi Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: So many places... I cant remember ... Posts: 476 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 4,564	Cry I can't believe these Feeling I have for you They tear me up inside And now that you won't talk to me It makes me want to cry You could never guess it The pain your silence brings Now my face is wet And my eyes sting ... What is happening to me? The thought of you used to bring me joy And now theres only sorrow but this can't last for long Clear sunny skies lie ahead for tomorrow ... Now if I could only get through the night ... __________________ Secret Love "Love everyone unless they dont love you back" http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_d...ex.php?act=idx
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equinn Ao's official cat girl~★ Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Emerald island (Eire) (Ireland) Posts: 1,601 Thanks: 10 Thanked 19 Times in 19 Posts Credits: 16,054	Re: Cry aww that is sooo sad that minds me ages ago i told some one i liked them and he neaver talked to me again ( still hasnt talked to me) but get job putin that in a poem i know its had to put them into words. 10/10 ^__^ __________________
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KimiFemi Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: So many places... I cant remember ... Posts: 476 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 4,564	Re: Cry >.< thanks Equinn it's an old poem yeah it was tough but turned out it was a mistake at the time but the emotion was still real in the end though we're still good friends lol for about 4 years now lol __________________ Secret Love "Love everyone unless they dont love you back" http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_d...ex.php?act=idx
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KimiFemi Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: So many places... I cant remember ... Posts: 476 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 4,564	Re: Cry why would he say such a stupid thing? glad you got over him >.< he's obviously an idiot lol guys are so weird if you dont like a girl that likes you just take the compliment and say sorry dont like you like that no need for insults or to aviod the person completely we Can handle the truth rolls eyes I have no problem telling a guy I don't like him lol but being nice about it __________________ Secret Love "Love everyone unless they dont love you back" http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_d...ex.php?act=idx
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koga23 ~The Master~ Join Date: May 2005 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 2,155 Thanks: 3 Thanked 11 Times in 10 Posts Credits: 18,101	Re: Cry Not all guys are weird well not me im normal B/w nice poem kimi i like it __________________ ....Player Killer.... † " There Is Nothing To Fear But F.E.A.R It Self "- (F.E.A.R) †
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P.R. Princess NalaMidnight Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Virginia Posts: 900 Thanks: 3 Thanked 17 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 14,170	Re: Cry this iI really like it. I'm glad you two r still friends. It's better that way.(^.^) __________________ ~GUNSLINGER~A7X=MIA~ ~ MYSPACE~AWESOME PLACE TO SAVE~ ~I give my heart and everything to my sailor~
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