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    crying ......

    the rain is pouring down
    straight on my face
    it looks like tears
    not from joy but hate.
    my feelings are nothing
    like the heart you betrayed
    all the spreaded rumors
    from the so called "best friend".
    now im sitting here crying
    because of you.
    i trusted you always
    until i saw the truth.


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    well theres a poem i hoped you all like it. ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    P.S.this was not about any body i was just bored.
    Last edited by iluvmyloser; Aug 03, 2007 at 05:37 PM.
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: crying ......

    This poem is sad really to me... It just heart breaks me..... But this poem was just too great and cool to read! So I hope to see more!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    thanks kiwi i really apreciate ur comment soooo thanks
    ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: crying ......

    This poem is so sad I almost started to cry! It was wonderful sis good use of emotion hope to see more!!^^



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    Re: crying ......

    Yeah, I've felt like this before. Ive felt this kind of anger as a result of being betrayed. Just remember this. People who betray you can't be trusted, (the never could be, even before they betrayed you). This is becuase THEY do not trust. They didn't trust in the loyalty of your friendship. People who have no tolerancy for trust... can never be trusted.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    thanks peach follows i know who and who not to trust i know my friends thanks for posting on this meow ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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