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Jun 20, 2007, 10:25 PM
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 In The Arms Of My Lover  Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! *watch's him sleep* XD
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 Credits: 3,351 | Crying Blood... Crying Blood... Come on, Break me apart Tear me into pieces, And throw me away Hurt me so bad, Make me cry Can you do it, Can you do the impossible?... "Can you really break me?" I cut myself all of the time, So a little pain is nothing for me Blood is my color and my drink, It so suits you and even me Let's paint the town red, Drown the whole world in red Watch as blood pours from above, Let the rain of blood begin!... "Watch the skys cry tears of blood" I cry all of the time, But only when i'm alone I can't let anyone see this side to me, Cause it would be the end of me Killing all of those I hate in my head, Wishing that it could all come true Tears pour from my eyes as I watch time pass me by, I cry so hard that I cry tears of blood... "Red tears pouring from my eyes" As I sit all alone with nowhere to go, I think of the past and all of the laughs What joy I had back then, What ever happened to that time? Of you and I, All alone together where no one would look Just you and me, But that can't be anymore... "You and me...No more" I flip through the old photos and I think back, To the time where we use to smile When we would laugh and hold one another, But that was the past and it was never meant to last Can you really say that you ever loved me, All of me? No one could ever do that, All except you... "You were the only one who ever understood me" Lost and all alone, That is what I am now This is what you have done to me, Throughout the years I long to see you and be with you once again, But that wont ever happen Never again will I get to see your smile, Or hear your sweet voice... "Never again will I see you" Come on, Break me apart Tear me into pieces, And throw me away Hurt me so bad, Make me cry Can you do it, Can you do the impossible?... "Can you really break me? Just try to break me apart" I cut myself all of the time, So a little pain is nothing for me Blood is my color and my drink, It so suits you and even me Let's paint the town red, Drown the whole world in red Watch as blood pours from above, Let the rain of blood begin!... "Watch the skys cry tears of blood and I shall cry along with them" You and I will forever be parted, Till it is my time to go as well I miss you so terribly, Why did you have to leave without me You broke me apart, You took my heart along with you I'm left all alone in this messed up world, Waiting for my time to come... "So that I may finally be with you once again"
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Jun 21, 2007, 12:14 AM
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| In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! *watch's him sleep* XD
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Credits: 3,351 | Re: Crying Blood... Thanks Forcefly!! *hugs*  I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks again for commenting!!
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Jun 21, 2007, 12:18 AM
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 Angelic  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms
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Credits: 49,192 | Re: Crying Blood... I love this poem!!!!! It's just wonderful... Your poems are wonderful Shinigami's_Angel!!!!!! I love them! I enjoyed reading this so much... I'm quite speacheless, as well as Rodney, I can just scream around how wonderful it is.. lol A great work Shinigami's_Angel!!! |
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Jun 21, 2007, 12:42 AM
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| In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! *watch's him sleep* XD
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Credits: 3,351 | Re: Crying Blood... Awww thank you so much Lasura!!! *hugs* Your so sweet!! I'm so glad that you liked my newest 1. And i'm also glad that you like all of my work. Thanks again for the sweet comment!!
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Jun 21, 2007, 01:41 AM
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| Heavy Metal Goddess  Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun
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Credits: 2,336 | Re: Crying Blood... Wow that is dark and a very good poem. It had me scared through some of it. It had romance and horror all wrapped up in one. Great job sis.
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Jun 21, 2007, 01:46 AM
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| In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! *watch's him sleep* XD
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Credits: 3,351 | Re: Crying Blood... Thank you sooooooo much Sis!! *hugs* I'm glad that you liked it and sorry that it scared ya a bit lol.I was in a bad mood when I wrote it...I think lol.Thanks again Sis for the awesome comment!!! *hugs*
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Jun 21, 2007, 09:10 AM
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| ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart
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Credits: 13,226 | Re: Crying Blood... AMAING!!!! This is the best poem I read!!!!! Really!!!!!! It's just awesome!!!!!!!! It's a dark poem and thats the best of it so I hope to see more!  Two thumbs up!
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