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    Crying Blood...

    Crying Blood...


    Come on, Break me apart
    Tear me into pieces, And throw me away
    Hurt me so bad, Make me cry
    Can you do it, Can you do the impossible?...

    "Can you really break me?"

    I cut myself all of the time, So a little pain is nothing for me
    Blood is my color and my drink, It so suits you and even me
    Let's paint the town red, Drown the whole world in red
    Watch as blood pours from above, Let the rain of blood begin!...

    "Watch the skys cry tears of blood"

    I cry all of the time, But only when i'm alone
    I can't let anyone see this side to me, Cause it would be the end of me
    Killing all of those I hate in my head, Wishing that it could all come true
    Tears pour from my eyes as I watch time pass me by, I cry so hard that I cry tears of blood...

    "Red tears pouring from my eyes"

    As I sit all alone with nowhere to go, I think of the past and all of the laughs
    What joy I had back then, What ever happened to that time?
    Of you and I, All alone together where no one would look
    Just you and me, But that can't be anymore...

    "You and me...No more"

    I flip through the old photos and I think back, To the time where we use to smile
    When we would laugh and hold one another, But that was the past and it was never meant to last
    Can you really say that you ever loved me, All of me?
    No one could ever do that, All except you...

    "You were the only one who ever understood me"

    Lost and all alone, That is what I am now
    This is what you have done to me, Throughout the years
    I long to see you and be with you once again, But that wont ever happen
    Never again will I get to see your smile, Or hear your sweet voice...

    "Never again will I see you"

    Come on, Break me apart
    Tear me into pieces, And throw me away
    Hurt me so bad, Make me cry
    Can you do it, Can you do the impossible?...

    "Can you really break me? Just try to break me apart"

    I cut myself all of the time, So a little pain is nothing for me
    Blood is my color and my drink, It so suits you and even me
    Let's paint the town red, Drown the whole world in red
    Watch as blood pours from above, Let the rain of blood begin!...

    "Watch the skys cry tears of blood and I shall cry along with them"

    You and I will forever be parted, Till it is my time to go as well
    I miss you so terribly, Why did you have to leave without me
    You broke me apart, You took my heart along with you
    I'm left all alone in this messed up world, Waiting for my time to come...

    "So that I may finally be with you once again"
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    Re: Crying Blood...

    One thing I know I can appreciate is that you always have a definative style.

    But this... was scary.
    Like rock bottom, need some help, and constant supervision in a locked unit- scary. And forgive me for saying... but judging by the poem, it seems you (or whoever this is about) has ALREADY been broken.

    But trust, Im not judging... Ive been there, and Im not too far from returning.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Crying Blood...

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    One thing I know I can appreciate is that you always have a definative style.

    But this... was scary.
    Like rock bottom, need some help, and constant supervision in a locked unit- scary. And forgive me for saying... but judging by the poem, it seems you (or whoever this is about) has ALREADY been broken.

    But trust, Im not judging... Ive been there, and Im not too far from returning.
    Agreed. I'm not hatin' either, but this was kinda... creepy. Not that I think you're crazy or anything, but "Let's paint the town red" has a whole new meaning to me, thanks to this poem. ^_^

    Good job, you kinda scared me a little. ^_^ Anyone who can do that with words alone is good at what they do.


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    Re: Crying Blood...

    I didn't think it was scary or creepy or anything liek that. However. I did think it was very -very- sad. It made me sadder then I am today in fact. (Don't feel bad about that. IT means your poem worked ) but I found myself liking it a lot. A lot a lot. I hope if you still feel so broken, that one day hopefully soon that you'll be peachy again. Goodluck.

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    Re: Crying Blood...

    Awesome Job Angel! Keep up the good work, I constantly driven to read more simply by the emotions you put into the poem. As the other writer's on this thread have said you have a definitive style and it works for you!

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    Re: Crying Blood...

    @ Peach_follows- Thank you soooo much for the comment!! *hugs* Sorry that it was a bit scary.I was just in a sad mood I guess lol.

    @ atomik_sprout-Thank you for the comment!!! *hugs* Sorry that it creeped it you out.But i'm glad that you still liked it!

    @ bratling-Thank for the sweet comment!! *hugs* I'm feelin alot better now.

    @ BlueFox1-Thank you sooooooooooooo much for the awesome comment Fox!!! *hugs* I'm so glad that you liked it.


    Thanks again for all the wonderful comments everyone. They always make me happy and cheer me up. Thanks again!!
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    Re: Crying Blood...

    Quote Originally Posted by Shinigami's_Angel View Post
    @ Peach_follows- Thank you soooo much for the comment!! *hugs* Sorry that it was a bit scary.I was just in a sad mood I guess lol.

    @ atomik_sprout-Thank you for the comment!!! *hugs* Sorry that it creeped it you out.But i'm glad that you still liked it!

    @ bratling-Thank for the sweet comment!! *hugs* I'm feelin alot better now.

    @ BlueFox1-Thank you sooooooooooooo much for the awesome comment Fox!!! *hugs* I'm so glad that you liked it.


    Thanks again for all the wonderful comments everyone. They always make me happy and cheer me up. Thanks again!!
    Now, because I see all your little smileys... Im even more impressed...

    Because you either A: stepped out of yourself to write this.
    Or B:You dug way down deep to address emotions not often expressed.

    Either way! KUDOS
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Crying Blood...

    Yeah I just felt like writting this and I was a bit sad. But thanks again so much.
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