Thanks to Peach for pointing out my mistake/mishap on the Tanka structure I thought I would just try to write one the right way... Thank You Peach!!! ^_^
"Crying"
Love is all I know
That's why the pain inside grows
Tears stay at a flow
A leaky faucet that's broke
In every droplet hurt soaked
"Led Me"
Drenched in own regrets
Loves' eyes dried up thoughts I kept
Led me to forget
Led me a path that's correct
Led me to a life that's blessed
"Owing"
In return I give
My heart for helping me live
I owe her that gift
I am back to the old days
A prisoner to Love's ways
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