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![]() Credits: 10,596 | "Crying Led Me Owing" <Tanka> Thanks to Peach for pointing out my mistake/mishap on the Tanka structure I thought I would just try to write one the right way... Thank You Peach!!! ^_^ "Crying" Love is all I know That's why the pain inside grows Tears stay at a flow A leaky faucet that's broke In every droplet hurt soaked "Led Me" Drenched in own regrets Loves' eyes dried up thoughts I kept Led me to forget Led me a path that's correct Led me to a life that's blessed "Owing" In return I give My heart for helping me live I owe her that gift I am back to the old days A prisoner to Love's ways
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![]() Credits: 696 | Re: "Crying Led Me Owing" <Tanka> I had to search for this poem you wrote... lol Ever since you told me you had written a poem explaining LOVE's hold on you & how it can affect one who is trapped in it's grasp & bring the best of the worst in someone... Meaning that love can bring you out of a slump, but also put you right back in it... That is why in your last couple of stanzas you are "back to the old days & a prisoner of love's ways"... I must say I am glad I took the time to come visit this site to see this poem you wrote... Thanks for the little hints to look for also even though I don't think I needed them cause, if no one can understand your writing you better believe that I can... ; ) You know that I am fascinated with all your writings cause as the reader you have to loook in between the lines to catch the message... I must say MERRY CHRISTMAS!!! Sorry I haven't visited in a while... Been a lil' busy ( U know) lol Luv' ya'!!! |
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