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    Crying Rain

    Crying Rain...

    The pain that I hold in my heart,Locked tightly away under lock and key
    Maybe it just wasn't meant to be,Just like everything in my life it seems
    I've sealed all of my emotions away a long time ago,But you seem to have woken up my heart
    I couldn't believe it,How could someone break the ice that incased my heart so tightly?!...

    "How could anyone do such a thing?"

    I stand out in the rain,And let it wash away my tears
    For some reason I can't stop them,I can't stop crying
    I'm not supossed to feel this,Not anymore or ever again
    I fall to my kness and begin to laugh heartlessly,And I can't help but cry even harder!...

    "Tear's in the rain"

    Why did I have to fall so hard for you,Why?
    I scream out my sorrows,As the storm rages on
    Why did it have to be you,Why couldn't it been someone else?
    Cause then maybe this woudn't have been so hard,Or as painful as it is!...

    "Why you?!"

    As I walk down the cold streets,Driping wet and all alone
    I feel so cold and so numb,I can feel the ice incaseing me all over again
    My eyes are glazed over as I reply it all again,This is just killing me slowly
    The memory of it all keeps replying over and over again,I can't take it anymore!...

    "Cold memories"

    I should have never pressed my luck,I should have been happy with the way things were
    But I just wanted to give it a try,And see if it might work out
    I guess it was just wishful thinking,Just like always
    I could have never been good enough for you,I'm meant to be all alone...

    "All alone"

    Why couldn't it work,I thought that we were perfect for one another
    But I guess I was wrong again,Maybe we were just to far apart
    I could have caught up if you had just givin me time,But you wouldn't want to wait that long
    I don't blame you,I only blame myself and my stupid emotions!...

    "I'm to blame for eveything"

    The pain that I hold in my heart,Locked tightly away under lock and key
    Maybe it just wasn't meant to be,Just like everything in my life it seems
    I've sealed all of my emotions away a long time ago,But you seem to have woken up my heart
    I couldn't believe it,How could someone break the ice that incased my heart so tightly?!...

    "How could anyone do such a thing? How can this happen?!"

    I stand out in the rain,And let it wash away my tears
    For some reason I can't stop them,I can't stop crying
    I'm not supossed to feel this,Not anymore or ever again
    I fall to my kness and begin to laugh heartlessly,And I can't help but cry even harder!...

    "Tear's in the rain and tear stained face"

    I walk in the rain,Searching for something i'll never find
    You were what I so longed for,For such a long time
    But it just wasn't meant to be,Nothing ever is it seems
    I come to a rageing river,And I fall slowly into it and everything just fads away...

    "I couldn't gone on with this life anymore,anyhow.
    My heart is broken and can never be mended back together.
    I loved you so much,but you could never return those feelings of mine.
    So here I am now,left out in the cold all alone.
    Crying in the rain!"....
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    Re: Crying Rain

    I really liked it. You've done a great job once again and I am proud or you sis. continue with the excellent work you're doing and I know you're next one will be great too.
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    Thank you sooooooooooo very much Sis!! *hugs* I'm so glad that you like it and that your proud of me as well. And ya wont have 2 worry cause i'll keep writtin till the day that I die lol.
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    Re: Crying Rain

    Well she wouldn't be the outstanding Angel, if her songs didn't truly compliment her talent and ability to capture emotions and form them into songs! Simply outstanding job Angel! *Hugs* Like Cherryblossom18 said keep up the good work and I'm proud of you also!

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    Thank you sooooooooooooooo very much Fox!!! *hugs* I'm glad that you like it and that your proud of me also.
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    Re: Crying Rain

    The title grabs my interests straight away and as i was reading it,it reminds me of how it feels to be alone.The pain.The touture.The insecurity.The longing of having true friends who can bear a burden to your sadness.That is what I felt.It made me feel...well I can't describe it.But the opposite of the mood that you created in this song...is what i want.What I truly desire at this moment.
    I loved this one.5 stars plus an extra 1 for the emotions.Hugs.Thmbs up.

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    Thank you soooo very much for your deep and wonderful comment JefferyXie! *hugs* I'm glad that you loved it and thanks for the 6 stars.
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    Re: Crying Rain

    very awesome pic sis and i totaly agree with the lyrics becuase
    the emotions you get from being walked away from is very harsh
    and can nevr really be got over sure there will be other loves and
    maybe a few smiles and a kiss.

    but nothing really totaly fades away from the one you wanted
    to be with and there not there for you,but life goes on and the scres are healed but the memeory never goes away becuase they were the one you
    wanted.

    this song really does express how things are and how you try to
    hide them but you can never truly hide from something that cuts you
    deeper than anyhting else will
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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