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    Smile Curse and Farewell

    I won't go quiet at the bell
    I won't go easy into hell,
    I'm not your pooch to buy and sell,
    I don't believe the lies you tell.

    I've got an itchy little fuse
    I've got a gale force in my shoes,
    I've got a supersonic force
    I've got a strike and no remorse.

    You're not the captain of my dreams
    You're not the coffee in my cream,
    So when your crummy life is through
    Don't come to me to comfort you.

    I got a strike and no remorse
    I got a supersonic force,
    I won't go quiet at the bell
    I won't go easy into hell.

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    Re: Curse and Farewell

    Erm, interesting poem you've got there, flaminghate. I enjoyed the way it rhymed, and liked the 'overall message' you gave to the other person. Some parts however were a little confusing to me. But again, that's just me. Nice poem, flaminghate. I look forward to reading more of your uniqueness.

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    Re: Curse and Farewell

    hey thanks for the comment,The white wolf.
    I'll have more later on

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    Re: Curse and Farewell

    I very much enjoyed this. It was powerful... almost liberating in a sense.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Curse and Farewell

    I really like it. Your showing refusal I like that alot. Keep up the awsome work(^.^)

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