How do I describe my love for her? Where do I begin?
I get shivers down my spine when I touch her skin.
She makes me feel special, she makes me feel high.
I can sit around forever, getting lost in her eyes.
I love the way she squeezes me when I grab her hips.
And her kiss is sweet--almost like sugar is coming from her lips.
There's no one on this planet who can make me feel this way.
Except for her because she knows me better than anyone can say.
When I look at her, I see the future possiblilites in life.
When she speaks to me, I hear the voice of my future wife.
The day she says she doesn't want me as a part of her life
is the day I die from a broken heart and love for Cyanide.
wow thats was awesome man i wish i had half of your talent
Practice makes perfect, my friend. Thank you for your comments, as usual. I'm glad you like my work so much.
Originally Posted by levitatinganimelover
It's very bittersweet, particularly at the end...
I try to keep away from the bitter parts of life, yet I still integrate it somewhat in the middle part of my writtings to end with a better perspective near the end.
I can sense a deep love, yet a jealousy of possibly loosing a joy which you may grow too much accustom to. All in all, pretty nice, but a bit too bitter for my palette ;)
I'm awestruck, man, I don' go through the poem forums much, not that I don' think that there's any good poem's here; it's jus' readin' some of them brings up some very bad memories, but ur poems r worth the effort. U really write from the heart and that's awesome. Hope u keep up the good work.:cool3:
Originally Posted by Joe Mage
Thanks to both of you for you comments and input. ^_^
Originally Posted by Soldat of life
I greatly appreciate it. I'm glad that you both like my writing. I hope that you'll like my future works as well.