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    Da Rhyming Therapist

    I feel like blabbin' at the mouth,
    To answer questions you ask.
    "Whats the point in holding on
    to love from the past?"

    Well if a burp is a burp...
    Is it still passing gas?
    If it comes out my mouth
    And not out my a**!!!??

    Whats the matter?
    You dont like my well thought out reflection???
    Did I answer your question,
    With another stupid question???

    WAIT!
    Did I just rhyme question with question?
    Is this confusing you?
    Should I just end this session?

    First, close your eyes,
    And count backwards from 10
    Tell me all about the feelings you've been holding in.

    You're cunfused? Insecure?
    Just wanna breakdown and cry?
    Well, Im a little hungry and my mouth is dry.

    I've been tokin' on this joint.
    Do you smoke pot?
    Hey, ya wanna hit this?
    Hmm... guess not....

    Well, times up!
    If you need me, give me a hollar.
    By the way... that'll be 300 dollars.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Da Rhyming Therapist

    me likey, got that little bounce in it that keeps the reader want to keep on reading, and the humor kept a smile on my face.
    plot goes a little askew, but then again there was little plot and just randomness
    8/10
    PS, pass that sh*t you greedy b*tch!

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    Re: Da Rhyming Therapist

    Quote Originally Posted by kamikazekrn View Post
    me likey, got that little bounce in it that keeps the reader want to keep on reading, and the humor kept a smile on my face.
    plot goes a little askew, but then again there was little plot and just randomness
    8/10
    PS, pass that sh*t you greedy b*tch!
    Hey now.... Just becuase my therapist is a little loopy, doesn't mean that ~I~ condone smoking pot.

    Hey, look! its my 420th post!
    ... Not Ever Again...

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