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    *Daffodil*

    You may think that the title had no relivance to the poem, but...it does XD
    Since this is my third poem, be as ruthless as you like, i'm no good at the deep poems >.<

    I'm clasping tight
    I won't let go
    Soft and delicate
    A beauty to show

    One last look
    My eyes clear
    They take you in
    Your clouded with fear

    I should fly away
    I'm braver now
    You'll always be with me
    Some way, some how.

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

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    Re: *Daffodil*

    Love poem Nice work, yet short ^^;

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    Re: *Daffodil*

    *narrows eyes at Rave* *slap* I like it. Love eh? Why didn't you say? I like it. Very coola. here I thought I was going to walk into he** XD!! nothing bad. I like it! ^ ^
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    Re: *Daffodil*

    short sweet poem using a flower to represent the poem......nice one Kerry. keep it up.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: *Daffodil*

    beautiful!!!!!

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    Re: *Daffodil*

    agree with blade, u used a flower as a symbol....short n simple- 8/10 ^^

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    Re: *Daffodil*

    wow it was so beautiful and cute


    Thank you soooo much equinn for leting me us this pic of your!!!!!

    This is a cute little clip:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PrZQIayUnbA

    My favorite song:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8frvSHvlzSM

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    Re: *Daffodil*

    it was short, but awesome, nice poem, keep it up.

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