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    Re: *Daffodil*

    Quote Originally Posted by Hold.Me.X.Thrill.Me
    You may think that the title had no relivance to the poem, but...it does XD
    Since this is my third poem, be as ruthless as you like, i'm no good at the deep poems >.<

    I'm clasping tight
    I won't let go
    Soft and delicate
    A beauty to show

    One last look
    My eyes clear
    They take you in
    Your clouded with fear

    I should fly away
    I'm braver now
    You'll always be with me
    Some way, some how.
    Very good at such a young age shorty, NICE! You make old people like me look bad!

    o~Piggy-san~o

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    Re: *Daffodil*

    Hmmm..... They said everything from the first to the last..... Nice poem.....

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    Re: *Daffodil*

    wow that was good but short

    keep it up though

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

    A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
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