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    Daisies of a Different Color

    I awoke to your scribbled writing
    with a post it hanging above my nose.

    I layed there wondering what to think,
    tucked my hair behind my ears and went to sleep.

    The next summer I awoke in a bed of daisies.

    I stood, my pajamas flapping with the wind,
    the smell was heavenly.

    I lifted my hands to the sky, sheilding
    my eyes from the sun.

    I stole part of the sky for you honey,
    I think you'll like it even though
    it didn't cost money.

    Fast asleep I fell.

    I awoke to your peace stricken face.

    Watching your sides move up and down,
    listening to your steady breathing,
    enhaling in and out.

    Your eyes fluttered open
    splashing me with blue and green.

    I handed you a piece of the sky and said
    " I love you, I hope you like it, it didn't take
    me long to get it."

    You smiled, tucked my hair behind my
    ears and said "let's never go to sleep."
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Daisies of a Different Color

    Nice poem! Its pretty romantic and reminds me of someone in a way. Great job!^_^

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    Re: Daisies of a Different Color

    Aw, sweet poem Fire! How you used daisies, a pieces from the sky to show each other your feelings and such. This was a creative piece. Nice job.

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    Re: Daisies of a Different Color

    Thank you all, I appreciate the compliments. ^-^ Not many people get to see my poetry so I don't get alot of comments on them.
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Daisies of a Different Color

    A really nice poem indeed!!! I like the imaginativness in it, the fact that you compare a a piece of the sky to love... so beautifull and so true!!! And waking up in the daisies, you've described that part so good that I just felt like going out and lying in the grass...
    A wonderful work!!!
    I'm happy to see you're becoming a great member!!! Always happy to see such people here on Anime Online!!!
    Last edited by Lasura; May 26, 2007 at 10:16 AM.

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    Re: Daisies of a Different Color

    Thank you very much ^-^

    That was one of the feelings I was going for with this poem.

    Yes, I am loving the site. It's really great.
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Daisies of a Different Color

    Do we have a hopeless romantic in the house? its okay if you are. This poem was great. Made me think of love and happiness. You should keep up the good work. Keep inspiring people to be happy.

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: Daisies of a Different Color

    Aw how romantic this poem is. It's so cute how you said it in your only words! I'm such a sucker for a romance poem! I would be honored to read more in the future!
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