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Diamond in the Rough | Daisies of a Different Color I awoke to your scribbled writing with a post it hanging above my nose. I layed there wondering what to think, tucked my hair behind my ears and went to sleep. The next summer I awoke in a bed of daisies. I stood, my pajamas flapping with the wind, the smell was heavenly. I lifted my hands to the sky, sheilding my eyes from the sun. I stole part of the sky for you honey, I think you'll like it even though it didn't cost money. Fast asleep I fell. I awoke to your peace stricken face. Watching your sides move up and down, listening to your steady breathing, enhaling in and out. Your eyes fluttered open splashing me with blue and green. I handed you a piece of the sky and said " I love you, I hope you like it, it didn't take me long to get it." You smiled, tucked my hair behind my ears and said "let's never go to sleep."
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,051 | Re: Daisies of a Different Color Aw, sweet poem Fire! How you used daisies, a pieces from the sky to show each other your feelings and such. This was a creative piece. Nice job. ![]()
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![]() Credits: 49,192 | Re: Daisies of a Different Color A really nice poem indeed!!! I like the imaginativness in it, the fact that you compare a a piece of the sky to love... so beautifull and so true!!! And waking up in the daisies, you've described that part so good that I just felt like going out and lying in the grass... A wonderful work!!! I'm happy to see you're becoming a great member!!! Always happy to see such people here on Anime Online!!! ![]() Last edited by Lasura; May 26, 2007 at 10:16 AM. |
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![]() Credits: 13,226 | Re: Daisies of a Different Color Aw how romantic this poem is. It's so cute how you said it in your only words! I'm such a sucker for a romance poem! I would be honored to read more in the future! ![]()
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Diamond in the Rough | Re: Daisies of a Different Color Well, thank you very much you two! ^-^ Yes I guess i am a bit of a hopeless romantic ... I can't help it. Be sure to look out for some more of my poems because they will be coming very soon...some will be posted today.
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