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    Dance of destruction in the dark of night

    The moon overhead becomes full,
    A man endures a fate so cruel.
    Muscle and bone bend in agony’s throe.
    A dogs claws and wolf fur wicked fast grow.
    His canine iris seems to almost glow.

    Through brush it sees a gentleman walk.
    As all animals it starts to stalk.
    Bounding fast the werewolf will bite and cut.
    Wet sounds mark ripping open of a gut.

    With nails now long and very sharp
    The attack he quickly deflects.
    A cape flutters, large like a tarp.
    A pair of razor teeth ejects.

    Gashed open the werewolf is on fire.
    Too bad he chose to prey on a vampire.
    Mouth open, claws ready to tear,
    With all energy it makes a pounce.
    But you can’t touch what takes to air,
    And flit’s as though it weighs not an ounce.

    Night air stirs with a howl of pain.
    His suit is covered in red stain.
    A huge hole is in the writhing wolf’s left breast.
    The victor holds the heart he tore from its chest.
    From pockets he produces a silver pen.
    Ramming it in beating muscle it ends then.

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    Re: Dance of destruction in the dark of night

    Yay this is one of my favourites, vampires and werewolves are very cool topics at the moment lol. A very vivid poem

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    Re: Dance of destruction in the dark of night

    Descriptions.. were flawless ^^ vivid as mystical mentioned.. I love descriptive poems.. ^^ you pictured the fight well.. and Kudos for the well used words and rhymes

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