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![]() | Dance of destruction in the dark of night The moon overhead becomes full, A man endures a fate so cruel. Muscle and bone bend in agony’s throe. A dogs claws and wolf fur wicked fast grow. His canine iris seems to almost glow. Through brush it sees a gentleman walk. As all animals it starts to stalk. Bounding fast the werewolf will bite and cut. Wet sounds mark ripping open of a gut. With nails now long and very sharp The attack he quickly deflects. A cape flutters, large like a tarp. A pair of razor teeth ejects. Gashed open the werewolf is on fire. Too bad he chose to prey on a vampire. Mouth open, claws ready to tear, With all energy it makes a pounce. But you can’t touch what takes to air, And flit’s as though it weighs not an ounce. Night air stirs with a howl of pain. His suit is covered in red stain. A huge hole is in the writhing wolf’s left breast. The victor holds the heart he tore from its chest. From pockets he produces a silver pen. Ramming it in beating muscle it ends then. |
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![]() ![]() | Re: Dance of destruction in the dark of night Yay this is one of my favourites, vampires and werewolves are very cool topics at the moment lol. A very vivid poem
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![]() ![]() | Re: Dance of destruction in the dark of night Descriptions.. were flawless ^^ vivid as mystical mentioned.. I love descriptive poems.. ^^ you pictured the fight well.. and Kudos for the well used words and rhymes |
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