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  1. Aug 19, 2006 08:21 PM #1
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    Dance of the Wee Ones

    Yay for fantasy and what not.. enjoy ^.^


    Dance of the Wee Ones.

    Dance ‘O little ones on the moonlit hill,
    Circled with larger toadstools delight,
    A pillow for a head and shelter of weather,
    There they glow so quaint in the night,

    A flute with pipes that howl through wind,
    Strings plucked, that thump and sting the air,
    A waltz of creatures that tap the ground,
    A festival at hand for nights without care.

    Sounds of laughter and joy on the breeze,
    Ale for all with pay of cinnamon kisses,
    All creatures different in size and shape,
    each with their own thoughts of wishes.
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    Re: Dance of the Wee Ones


    man u should keep making this points there so awesome!!!!!



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    Re: Dance of the Wee Ones

    Eh heh.. thanks.. I thought this one was fun ^.^
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    Re: Dance of the Wee Ones

    Quote Originally Posted by -=Broken^Halo=- View Post
    Eh heh.. thanks.. I thought this one was fun ^.^
    i hope evry1 isnt lazy enough to read this 1
    its short but perfect.



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    Re: Dance of the Wee Ones

    Well.. not quite perfect... the last stanza is a bit ... shaky.. if you ask me..
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    Re: Dance of the Wee Ones

    Quote Originally Posted by -=Broken^Halo=- View Post
    Well.. not quite perfect... the last stanza is a bit ... shaky.. if you ask me..
    but it rimes really good. that what matters



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    Re: Dance of the Wee Ones

    Eh heh.. I should show you one of my "Non-ryming" Poems.. it would flip your mind :P
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    Re: Dance of the Wee Ones

    Quote Originally Posted by -=Broken^Halo=- View Post
    Eh heh.. I should show you one of my "Non-ryming" Poems.. it would flip your mind :P
    no no this cant be hapening
    i dunno like non ritmo and me sleepy



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