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  1. Mar 04, 2011 06:24 AM #1
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    Dandelions =D

    i wrote this poem for some nature show crap that we had ...its a mini one so enjoy =D

    White huddled family
    their sleep long
    Slowly arouse
    to a gentle song
    Calling out to them
    the mute song of air
    Tells them to awaken
    and get out of there
    Lone fliers break
    from their homely mesh
    and glide on the spring air
    that felt so fresh

    hope ya liked eet =D
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    Re: Dandelions =D

    Oh wow, i love it!! The words just flow together, now im thinking about flowers, which is totally unlike me. >.<

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    Re: Dandelions =D

    Aww.. such a cute poem with graphic details despite the simplicity... very nice
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    Re: Dandelions =D

    i really liked it. i love the part "the mute song of air Tells them to awaken" *closes my eyes* i can just imagine the feel of the wind on my face blowing my hair around and listening to the sound of the wind. it is a wonderful poem. *smiles* good job! =]
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    Re: Dandelions =D

    thanks! =D glad u liked it ^_^

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