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Old Nov 05, 2007, 01:16 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Dano "Damae"

La esperanzade un amor perdido,
El dolor de un amor querido;
Vives hoy, mueres manana,
La amas un dia, el otro la danas.
El amor es sencible y tienes que cuidarlo,
El amor es devil y es facil danarlo.
Yo esperimento esto,
Y se lo que ablo,
Porque un dia dane a la persona que amo.


The hope of a lost love,
The pain of a wanted love;
Live today, die tomorrow,
You love her one day, the other you hurt her;
The love is sensible and need to take care of him,
The love is weak and is easy to be damage.
I experience this,
and I know what I'm talking about,
Because one day I hurt the person that I love.


I hope you like it.
i did the translatin, so tell me how is it.

The title is DAMAGE
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Old Nov 05, 2007, 01:36 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Dano "Damae"

Hmmm... ^^ It's nice even though the translation seems a bit odd... didn't you mean "hurt" and not "heard"? lol ^^ I dunno... but I love the way you write (hmm... I'll ask a friend who understand spanish to read it for me aloud to understand how it sounds, cuz it must sound just great), it is short but descriptive and has a great though in it...

I will be waiting for the next one!! ^^ Keep up the good work. And thank You for translating soooo much!!!!!!!
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Old Nov 05, 2007, 02:04 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Dano "Damae"

did i tell u that my english eskills are very low.
I make alot of mistakes with my spelling.
I'm sory for that.
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Hmmm... lol ^^ should have sent it for spellcheck to me!!!! You can do so next time!

But now... didn't you mean "love is sensible and YOU need to take care of IT"? And "easy to be damageD" ^^ lol Those two are sticking in the eyes a bit, everything else is quite ok.

I need a lot of learning too though. And don't worry- your language is quite ok, I've seen worse You'll get better if you hang around AO, believe me (we even have English language teachers here)
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Old Nov 05, 2007, 02:40 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: Dano "Damae"

actually i'm living in san diego Ca. I'm learnin english.
and for the next time i send it to u. so u can check my spelling
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Old Nov 05, 2007, 02:44 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Well,

To tell you the truth I love you poem Why? Because I see truth in it...Me and my bf are usualy like this....specaily him



I was amazed when I read this...Now I'm glad

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This poem is an experience of me with my exgfrd I hurt her really bad.
She said that she alread forgive me but i donow
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Re: Dano "Damae"

wow.. simple short.. yet packs lots of emotion... i like it... nice nice... a very good poem.. nicely done ^^ keep it up ^^
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